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´©±¸³ª debate #7 - Should Toy Guns be Banned?

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  • 2014-01-30 22:28
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Debate 7. Should Toy Guns be Banned?

 

My opinion ; Yes, it should be.

 

Reasons:

First it would make the kid  a criminal in the future. Kids are growing ones. So if they know how to use guns, they will like it more and more as they grow up and they would be a criminal which uses it. Also they would like to fight with others.

 

Second, it is dangerous when you shoot it to others. A toy gun can smash 3 puddings in a row, 1 Coke can and one drinking yogurt bottle. So if you shoot it to others, they would get badly hurt.

 

Third, kids aren¡¯t very careful. Kids are not as careful as adults. Kids don¡¯t think of danger after it so it has high possibillities which they could shoot it to others.

  

 

 

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                                          My opinion:toy guns should be banned
                                    
                                   toy guns should be banned because it's very dangerous
                                  you can kill people if you shoot in the eye(or somewhere else).
                                               It teaches kids bloody violence.
                                       And it is a hard way to learn and regret.
                                 Most kids play with them and become bad persons
                                      It is a bad influence for kids like us.
             and in a show, somebody proved that toy guns are stronger than police guns.
                                   so if kids use them, they have no CONTROL.
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My opinion:toy guns have to be banned

I think toy guns should be banned.
Because, first that is very dangerous.
It was on the news many times.
The toy guns are very dangerous.So in the law,we have to use goggles.
Because of toy guns, someone cannot see well.
Almost toy guns are for 14 or more.
But now all stationery store sells toy guns for young people.
The problem of toy gun is the users don't think that it can harm people.
Second, boys think the toy guns are harmless.
The toy gun has power which can blow a can into p***es.
Also, there's not many things to do with toy guns.
So finally, I think toy guns should be banned.
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  • 2014-01-27 17:00
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SHOULD TOY GUNS BE BANNED?

 

I think toy guns should be banned. Boys in this century like to play with toy guns, whether or not if they have bullets. Boys don't think guns are dangerous to play with.

But it is really dangerous if you aim them at a person or animal. That target can be seriously hurt or can even die. Boys, however, think it is fun to shoot at living things. If you get shot by a gun, you have to shout for help. Then when you find an adult, tell him or her about the gun incident and ask to call your parents or 911 for safety. If you can¡¯t find an adult, call your parents right away. They will help you get home. If the police station is near where you are, you can go there and ask for help.

 

Boys don't realize how dangerous a gun is by themselves, so parents or teachers should teach them what problem a toy gun can cause. Adults should also tell them not to shoot with toy guns or play with them. Guns are the most dangerous things in life, so they should seize the guns and keep it where boys can¡¯t find. Even if adults let them play with guns, they have to warn them not to shoot anything. ¡®One shoot and you will find yourself in prison, where they give you bread and water, but nothing else.¡¯ they should say.

They have to make boys to know how a gun is harmful and have them not play with them anymore.

 

Many boys know what a gun can do by my age, but the ones that have experience with guns a lot can¡¯t resist shooting them. If they don't stop shooting even when adults told them not to, they mostly are given a lecture. But I think boys shouldn't be given a lecture by shooting guns. If adults lecture them, they get stress a lot and wants to shoot more than when they were not given a lecture. Adults think lectures are the best way to get boys to regret what they have done, but I don't think so. By giving them a special education about guns and what harm it can do to living things, boys can look back to what they have done and can regret themselves for doing such a dangerous thing. I think toy guns should be banned from children, but adults who lecture them should look back to what they have done to children, too.

 

 

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