누구나 Debate 1 - Are Video and Computer Games Good For You? > 초등영어 게시판

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pobi1970
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2013-12-16 21:59

초3/여/새라

Most of the kids like to play video(computer)games more than 1hour a day. However, I think playing too much video(computer)games are not good for us. Now, I will give you 3 reasons why I think it is bad for us.

The first reason why I think video(computer)games are not good is because it is sometimes violent. My brother likes to play a game called 'League of Legend'. I was watching the game, and it was very violent. The team had to kill the other team. Also, there was a space that we canchat with each other. The other team doesn't know who else is playing, so they just write bad words to others.I think because of that game, my brother is more violent and uses more bad words.

The second reason is because it is not healthy to our health. Video(computer)games are very fun, so we would like to do it for a long time. when we just sit on a chair, doing games, our neck, waist, and legs don't have to use power. So, we can get weak. Also, if we spend the night to do computer games, we can't sleep and the next day, our body has less energy and tired, we can't do our work propely.

The last reason is because we can get addicted to games. Last year, a boy was addicted to computer games and he killed hid brother. Then, he said"I killed him but there is no item."Like this, if we get addicted to games, we can get crazy and believe the bad information in games are true.

Of course games are fun, but I think playing too much games are not good.

령돌맘
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2013-12-17 13:50

새라의 의견은 아이들의 생각을 대표로써 적어놓은 것 처럼 멋진걸?? ^^
이유에 대한 근거들도 잘 쓴것 같고..
앞으로도 멋진 모습 기대할께....^^
다음번에는 찬반이 골고루 나올 수 있도록 괜찮은 주제를 골라봐야겠다..
그래야 더 재미있겠지? ^^

레인보우
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2013-12-20 14:49

와우~~~~이거 꼭 오빠들이 읽어봤으면 좋겠다
의견에 대한 이유를 아주 또박또박 잘썼네
역시 아줌마가 새라팬인게 자랑스럽다니까
참 잘썼어요

메이플린
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2013-12-15 23:24

초3/여/에밀리

I think video games are not a good thing to do.

First, according to a newspaper, a norwegian terrorist had enjoyed a video game called 'call of duty'. It is a game which the player goes into a airport in Russia and shoots gun to all the Russians. It made the terrorist think the game was real and made him kill 68 people. I want to say from this story that video games are using violence too much. There are many video games using violence. But adults are permitting children to do that. It will maybe make children be a murderer like this terrorist here. Also, playing too much games made this terrorist think that the game was real. I'm not positive about it, but we could be like that too. Therefore, I think video games have to be more peaceful and we have to play games using time limits.

Second, it makes student's health go worse. Students get to sleep less and play games instead of doing sports. Playing games instead of doing sports make the child plump than the ordinary children's size. Sleeping less and being plump definitely isn't a healthy thing to do. So I think we should rather do sports than playing video games.

Third, people who plays games risk their lives to get an item. I mean, they're desperate of getting an item. My friend, which I believe that he's been game poisoned, says that he'll risk his life if he could get an item. And there was a circumstance that a student hit another student and forced him to play games so the victim self-destructed. It was because the injurer wanted items very badly. So I think games would have to remove items out of the game.

Therefore, I think we shouldn't do video games very much.

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에밀리가 아직 논리적인 주장을 하기엔 부족한 점이 많아요.

관련기사를 찾아서 읽어보고, 영작할 때 사전을 찾으면서 적긴 했는데,

다음엔 먼저 자신의 생각을 적어보고 기사를 검색해 보도록 해야겠단 생각이 들었어요.

관련 기사를 읽기전 그 주제에 대해 얼마만큼 생각을 할 수 있는지도 본인이 느껴야 할 것 같구요,

기사를 먼저 읽으니까 그 기사 내용쪽으로 많이 가게 되는 것은 아닌가 생각이 듭니다.^^

다른 친구들의 글에 궁금한 점이 있으면 적어보라고 해서 적었다가 삭제했어요.

반박하는 부분은 나중에 하자고 하신 글을 뒤늦게 보았네요.^^

나중에라도 서로 질문하고 답하는 것을

아이들이 자신의 주장을 다른 친구들에게 잘 이해시키는 기회라고 받아들였으면 좋겠고,

누가 옳다 그르다가 아닌 건전한 토론을 경험해 볼 수 있는 기회로 여겼으면 좋겠어요.

령돌맘
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2013-12-16 15:50

와~논리정연하게 잘 정리해서 썼네요..^ㅡ^

처음에 주제 올릴때 그에 대한 기사와 내용을 적으려고 했으나...
그러면 의견이 한쪽으로 치우치게 될까봐 그냥 주제만 따랑 올리게 되었네요..^ㅡ^

우선 자기주장에 대한 생각을 간단하게 적어보고...
나중에 관련글을 찾아서 읽어보고 근거를 들어보면 좋을 것 같아요..^ㅡ^

상대방 글에 대한 반론은 조금 있다가 해보려고 합니다..
아직 어린 친구들에겐 부담이 될것 같아서요..^^;;

아무튼 에밀리~~ 아줌마는 에밀리의 글을 보고 깜짝 놀랐다...^^
울 아들램들에게도 꼭 보여줄께...
다음 토론도 기대 되는걸??

행복씨
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2013-12-16 16:41

다 읽지는 않았지만, 시작을 훌륭하게 해주신 것 같아요.
저도 에밀리와 같은 글을 기대하며 시작했는데,
일단 시간을 지켜야 할 것 같아 아이와 함께 얘기하는 등의 고민 시간 없이
아이더러 올리라 했더니, 아이가 대강 올렸네요.

적절한 근거 제시를 통해 활기찬 디베이트가 될 수 있도록 저도 함께 으쌰으쌰~~ 힘 받고 갑니다 ^^

난경지원서영
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2013-12-15 16:42

초3/여/새라

I think video games are not good for us.

because they can make our concentration in everything bad and we can be addiction to video games so I think we can go outside and play with our friends then playing video games inside.

령돌맘
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2013-12-16 15:58

새라야~
아줌마도 게임보다는 밖에서 노는것이 훨씬 좋다고 생각해~~^^
새라는 게임 좋아하니??
아줌마 아들도 게임을 좋아해서 주말에만 한시간 할 수 있게 해주는데...

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