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Hi! I'm sally. I want to talk about my family. In my family there are my mom, dad and my sister, and of caurce me, too. My 1st paragraph will be what I'm writing now. The 2nd paragraph will be about me. 3rd paragraph will be sister, 4th paragraph can be mom and of caurce the 5th paragraph can be dad.
Hi! Nice to meet you again. I'm Sally. I think it's introducing time! I woke up at 7:30 and I go to school at 8:00. Time to finish school is at 1:00 . I do homework at 1:30. 1:15~2:30 is play time or TV time. Then 2:30~5:00 is working time. I'm so so so so so busy!
Hi! Nice to meet you. I'm Julie, Sally's sister. My sister is busy, but I'm not. I go to kindergarten, then go back home. Then I play outside or inside. But later I read a book "learn to read". Good bye.
Hi! I'm mom. My English name is Candy. I like candy, so I call myself Candy. My family likes Candy. I want to change my name, but my family said "Do not change a-n-y-m-o-r-e"
Hi! I'm dad. My English name is Kevin. My job is a manager of ~~. It's very important job. I'm 39years old. I love my family all of us.
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