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´Ù½Ã µ¹¾Æ¿À´Âµ¥ ½Ã°£ÀÌ Á» °É·È³×¿ä. ´Ê¾î¼­ Á˼ÛÇÕ´Ï´Ù.^^

ÁÙ¸®°¡ ÇϹٵ带 ²Þ²Ù°í ÀÖ´Ù´Â À̾߱â´Â ¼¼¹øÂ° Àϱ⿡¼­ ÀÌ¹Ì Àоú´Âµ¥,
Á¤¸» ¸ÚÁý´Ï´Ù.²ÞÀ¸·Î¸¸ ³¡³¯ °ÍÀÌ ¾Æ´Ï¶ó ²À ÀÌ·ç¾îÁö±æ,
±×¸®°í ÀÌ·ç¾îÁöµµ·Ï ²ÙÁØÈ÷ ³ë·ÂÇÏ±æ ºô°Ô¿ä.

Àü¿¡µµ ¸»¾¸µå·ÈÁö¸¸, À̹ø¿¡ ÁÙ¸®¿¡°Ô ¾ê±âÇÏ°í ½ÍÀº ³»¿ëÀº
À帣¿¡ ¸Â°Ô ±ÛÀ» ¾²´Â skill ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.
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±Í¿±±âµµ ÇÏ°í ¿ôÀ½µµ ³ª°í..±×·¸³×¿ä.


±×·±µ¥ Áß¿äÇÑ °ÍÀº Áö±ÝÀÇ ÀÛ¹®Àº ¾îµð±îÁö³ª 'Àϱâ', ±×°Íµµ Ãʵî»ýÀÇ Àϱâ¶ó´Â Á¡ÀÌ¿¡¿ä.

¹®¹ýÀû Á¤È®ÇÔÀÌ ¿µÀÛÀÇ Ã¹¹øÂ° °í·Á»çÇ×À̶ó¸é, ±× ´ÙÀ½Àº ÀûÀýÇÑ ¾îÈÖ·Â,
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Àϱâ´Â narrative writing ¿¡ ÇØ´çµÇ´Â °ÍÀ¸·Î Áö½ÄÀü´ÞÀ̳ª ¼³µæÀ» ¸ñÀûÀ¸·Î ÇÏ´Â ±Û°ú´Â
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¾¦¾¦ Ãʵ¾î Äڳʿ¡ ÀÖ´Â ±ÛÀ» °¡Á®¿ÔÀ¸´Ï Âü°íÇϽñ⠹ٶø´Ï´Ù.^^


 narrative writing (À̾߱⠾²±â-Àϱâ, ¼Ò¼³ µî) :
°³ÀÎÀûÀÎ À̾߱⸦ Ç®¾î³ª°¡´Â Àϱâ Çü½Ä°ú »õ·Î¿î À̾߱⸦ âÀÛÇØ³»´Â µ¿È­, ¼Ò¼³ µîÀÇ ÇüŰ¡

ÀÌ¿¡ ÇØ´çµË´Ï´Ù.

descriptive writing(±â¼ú ÀÛ¹®) :
¹¦»ç´ë»ó¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Áö½ÄÀÌ ¾ø´Â µ¶ÀÚ¸¦ ´ë»óÀ¸·Î Àι°, Àå¼Ò µî¿¡ ´ëÇØ ±â¼úÇØ ³ª°¡´Â ÀÛ¹®ÇüÅÂÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

expository writing (¼³¸í ÀÛ¹®) :
ÇѰ¡Áö ÁÖÁ¦¿¡ ´ëÇØ ÇØ¼³ÇÏ´Â ¼³¸í¹® ÇüÅÂÀÇ ±ÛÀ» ¸»ÇÕ´Ï´Ù. Çб³ ¸®Æ÷Æ® µîÀÌ ¿©±â¿¡ ÇØ´çµÇ´Âµ¥, Á¤º¸¸¦ Áָ鼭 ¼³¸íÇϱ⵵ ÇÏ°í ºñ±³¸¦ ÅëÇÑ °á·ÐÀ» À̲ø¾î³»±âµµ ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

persuasive writing (argument essay, ¼³µæ ÀÛ¹®-»ç¼³, ¼­Æò µî ):
ÇѰ¡Áö ÁÖÁ¦¿¡ ´ëÇØ ³²À» ¼³µæÇϱâ À§ÇÑ ±ÛÀÔ´Ï´Ù. ÀÌ·¯ÇÑ ÇüÅÂÀÇ ±Û¿¡¼­´Â ÀÚ½ÅÀÇ ÁÖÀåÀ» µÞ¹ÞħÇÒ¸¸ÇÑ ³í¸®³ª ±Ù°Å¸¦ Á¦½ÃÇÏ´Â skill ÀÌ ÇÊ¿äÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

 

ÁÙ¸®´Â narrative writing ÀÇ ÇüÅ¿¡ persuasive writing ¿¡¼­³ª ÇÊ¿äÇÑ ¾îÈÖ°¡
ºÎÀûÀýÇÏ°Ô ¼¯¿© ÀÖ´Â ÀÛ¹®À» Çϰí ÀÖÁö¿ä.
¾ÕÀ¸·Î ±ÛÀ» ¾µ¶§¿¡´Â ÀÌ Á¡À» Âü°íÇØÁֽñ⠹ٶø´Ï´Ù.

±×·³, Çѹ®À徿 »ìÆìº¼°Ô¿ä.


(Saturday december 30th 2006)
Saturday, December 30th, 2006
 

I had a headache.
I had a headache today.
¿À´Ã ÀÖ¾ú´ø ÀÏÀ» ¾ê±âÇϰí ÀÖÀ¸¹Ç·Î today ¸¦ ³Ö¾ú½À´Ï´Ù.


I conjecture that I ate too much ice cream cone.
I guess that I ate too much ice cream cone.
conjecture ¶ó´Â ´Ü¾î´Â guess ·Î ¹Ù²Ù¾ú½À´Ï´Ù.

 

oh, my! How sad I am.
Oh, my! How sad I am.
capitalization ¿¡¼­ ½Ç¼ö°¡ ÀÖ¾úÁö¿ä?

 

but I can't continence about eat an icecream cone.
But I can't help eating this sweet (stuff).
¿ª½Ã ´ë¹®ÀÚ·Î ½ÃÀÛÇϱ⸦ °íÃÆ±¸¿ä.
continence ´Â help ~ing Ç¥ÇöÀ¸·Î ¼öÁ¤Çß½À´Ï´Ù.
±×¸®°í ¾Õ¿¡¼­ ice cream cone ÀÌ ÀÌ¹Ì ¾ð±ÞµÇ¾ú±â ¶§¹®¿¡ sweet, ȤÀº sweet stuff ·Î
»ì¦ ´ëÄ¡ÇØº¸¾Ò½À´Ï´Ù.
¼öÁسôÀº ¿µÀÛ¿¡¼­´Â °°Àº ´Ü¾î°¡ ¹Ýº¹µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ÇÇÇØ¾ß ÇÑ´Ù°í ¸»¾¸µå·ÈÁö¿ä? ^^


And I also became corpulent.
Also, I'll be fat if I don't cotrol enjoying it.
corpulent ¿ª½Ã fat À¸·Î ¹Ù²å°í, ¿Ö ±×·±Áö¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ÀÌÀ¯µµ Ãß°¡Çؼ­
ÀÚ¿¬½º·´°Ô ¿¬°áÀÌ µÇµµ·Ï Çß½À´Ï´Ù.

 

I don't like to become obese.
But I don't want to suffer from obesity.
¿ª½Ã but À» ³Ö¾î ¾Õ¹®Àå°úÀÇ ¿¬°áÀ» ºÎµå·´°Ô ¸¸µé¾îº¸¾Ò±¸¿ä.
¶×¶×ÇØÁö±â ½È´Ù´Â ¸»µµ ÀÌ¿Õ obese ¶ó´Â ¾î·Á¿î ´Ü¾î¸¦ ½èÀ¸´Ï
'ºñ¸¸'À¸·Î °í»ýÇϱ䤤 ½È´Ù ¶ó´Â ¿µÀÛÀ¸·Î ¹Ù²ãº¸¾Ò½À´Ï´Ù.


I want to just beautiful, gentle and slim girl.
I just want to be a beautiful, gentle and slim girl.
beautiful ¾Õ¿¡ be µ¿»ç³Ö±â¸¦ ½Ç¼öÇßÁö¿ä? just ÀÇ À§Ä¡µµ ÁÖÀÇÇØÁֽñ¸¿ä.


before three months I was very svelte. But now I'm not svelte anymore...
Three months ago I was very svelte. But now I'm not thin anymore...
3°³¿ùÀüÀ̶ó´Â Ç¥ÇöÀº Three months ago ·Î °íÃÆ½À´Ï´Ù. svelte ¶õ ´Ü¾îµµ
½¬¿î ¸»Àº ¾Æ´ÏÁö¸¸ ¼öÁ¤ÇÏÁö ¾Ê°í ±×´ë·Î µÎ¾ú½À´Ï´Ù.
ÇÏÁö¸¸ ¹Ýº¹À» ÇÇÇϱâ À§ÇØ µÚ¿¡¼­´Â thin À̶ó Ç¥ÇöÇß±¸¿ä.

 

what shall I do?  I don't know.
What shall I do?  I don't know.
capitalization  ½Ç¼ö!

 

however please don't think that I'm too obese...
But please don't think that I'm too fat...
obese ¶õ ÈçÄ¡ ¾ÊÀº ´Ü¾î°¡ ³Ê¹« ¹Ýº¹µÇ´Â °Íµµ ±Ý¹°. fat À¸·Î °íÃÆ½À´Ï´Ù.

 

But that is my second anguish.
Anyway, that's what I'm worried about in the second place.

but À̳ª however ÀÇ ¹Ýº¹º¸´Ù È­Á¦ÀÇ ÀüȯÀ» À§ÇØ anyway ¸¦ »ç¿ëÇØº¸¾Ò¾î¿ä.
±×¸®°í anguish ¿ª½Ã ½±Áö ¾ÊÀº ´Ü¾îÁö¿ä.
ÀÌ°Í ¿ª½Ã be worried about ·Î Ç¥ÇöÇØº¸¾Ò±¸¿ä.

 


 

: julie´ÔÀÇ ±ÛÀÔ´Ï´Ù.
(Saturday december 30th 2006) I had a headache. I conjecture that I ate too much ice cream cone.oh, my! How sad I am. but I can't continence about eat an icecream cone. And I also became corpulent. I don't like to become obese.I want to just beautiful, gentle and slim girl.before three months I was very svelte. But now I'm not svelte anymore...what shall I do?  I don't know.however please don't think that I'm too obese...But that is my second anguish.

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