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 À̹ø¿¡µµ Áٹٲ㾲±â´Â ¿ÏÀü ¹«½ÃµÈ ¼ºÇöÀÌÀÇ Àϱâ..ÇÏÇÏ.
ÆíÀÇ´ë·Î Çѹ®Àå¿¡ ÁÙÇϳª¾¿À¸·Î °íÃÆ½À´Ï´Ù.

 

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Tuesday.January 23rd
Tuesday, January 23rd

 

< My new friends and brothers >
< My New Friends and Brothers >
Á¦¸ñ ´ë¹®ÀÚ·Î ½ÃÀÛÇϱâ..

 

I go to English class and study English.
°íÄ¥ µ¥°¡ ¾ø½À´Ï´Ù.^^

 

That's how I can right this.
That's how I can write this diary.
write ¿Í right ´Â ¹ßÀ½ÀÌ °°±ä ÇÏÁö¿ä? ÇÏÇÏ.


I ride my class bus, there are lots of friends there.
When I ride my class bus, I can meet lots of friends there.
¹ö½º¸¦ Ÿ¸é~ À» ÀÚ¿¬½º·´°Ô ¸¸µé±â À§ÇØ when À» ³Ö¾îºÃ±¸¿ä.
there °¡ µÎ¹ø µé¾î°¡µµ »ó°üÀº ¾øÁö¸¸, Á» ´õ ÀÚ¿¬½º·´°Ô ¼öÁ¤À» ÇØº¸¾Ò½À´Ï´Ù.

 

I have two friends.

 

I like them, but I sure not like the boys are bullys, they sit everywhere!
I like them, but I surely don't like the bullys, who sit everywhere!
sure ÀÇ »ç¿ëÀ» ¹®Àå¼Ó¿¡¼­ ´õ ¸¹ÀÌ ÀÍÇô¾ß ÇÒµí.
±×¸®°í boys are bullys º¸´Ù´Â ±×³É bullys ¶ó°í ÇÏ´Â°Ô °£°áÇϰí ÀÌÇØµµ ½±°Ô µÉ°Í °°½À´Ï´Ù.


One of my friend have been crying since the bullys punched my friend.
One of my friends cried when the bullys punched him(her).
one of my ~ Ç¥ÇöµÚ¿¡ ³ª¿À´Â ´Ü¾î´Â º¹¼öÇüÀÌ µÇ¾î¾ß ÇÑ´ä´Ï´Ù.
'~µé ÁßÀÇ Çϳª'¶õ Àǹ̰ŵç¿ä.
±×¸®°í ½ÃÁ¦ÀÇ °æ¿ì, ¸»½é²Ù·¯±âµé¿¡°Ô ¾ò¾î¸Â°í Áö±Ý±îÁö °è¼Ó ¿ï°í ÀÖ´Â °ÍÀº ¾Æ´ÏÁö¿ä?
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I want to revenge for my friend.
I want to revenge for what they did to my friend.
I want to revenge my friend.
revenge µÚ¿¡ for °¡ ³ª¿À¸é ~¸¦ À§Çؼ­ ¶ó´Â Àǹ̰¡ ¾Æ´Ï¶ó ~ ¿¡ ´ëÇØ º¹¼öÇÑ´Ù´Â ¶æÀÌ µË´Ï´Ù.
±×·¯´Ï±î ³» Ä£±¸¿¡ ´ëÇØ º¹¼öÇÑ´Ù´Â ¶æÀÌ µÇ¹ö¸®Áö¿ä.
Á¤È®ÇÏ°Ô ÇÏ·Á¸é '³» Ä£±¸¿¡°Ô ÇÑ ÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇØ º¹¼öÇÑ´Ù'°¡ µÇ°Å³ª
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  - The End -

 

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