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돌아온 완벽추구맨 재윤이~!!
그런데 이번 글은 약간은 문장이 길어지면서 고칠 부분이 간간히 눈에 보이네요.^^
한문장씩 살펴볼게요.
<The important thing>
<The Important Thing>
제목의 각 단어는 대문자로 시작하기.
Tuesday January 30th
I read a book 'The important book' by Margaret Wise Brown.
I read 'The important book' by Margaret Wise Brown.
I read a book titled 'The important book' by Margaret Wise Brown.
재목자체에 book 이 들어가 있어서 반복이 되므로 다르게 한번 수정해봤어요.
I made a book like it on my own.
So I made a book like it on my own.
앞문장과의 연결을 매끄럽게 하기 위해 접속사를 추가했구요.
I will introduce one of the pages.
It's about the book.
'The important thing about book is that we read it.
'The important thing about the book is that we read it.
about book 에서 the 가 빠졌지요? 뒤의 문장도 마찬가지구요.
book 같은 명사가 올때에는 항상 관사 부분, 혹은 단복수형 부분을 신경써주어야 한답니다.
It is funny or sad. And sometimes it makes us happy.
We can learn a lot in the book.
There are lots of kinds.
But the important thing about book is that we read it.'
But 'The important thing about the book is that we read it.
역시 the 가 빠져서 넣었습니다.
I wrote about mirror, chopsticks, fire and me too.
I wrote about the mirror, chopsticks, fire and me too.
역시 mirror 가 나와서 정고나사를 붙여주었어요.
It is hard work making a book.
Making a book was a hard work.
자연스럽게 문장이 흐르도록 약간 수정해보았구요.
Because I have to make the cover and write many sentences.
Because I had to make the cover and write many sentences.
과거형으로 시제를 바꿨습니다.
But I like it.
수고하셨어요~!!
: 재윤맘님의 글입니다.
마가렛와이즈브라운의 The important book을 읽고 책만들기를 하여보았습니다.이 책이 너무도 좋아 자기만의 책을 만들겠다고 해서요.이 생각 저 생각 하다가 다섯가지로 겨우 줄여서 책을 만들었어요.책 만들기를 하고 쓴 일기입니다. <The important thing>Tuesday January 30thI read a book 'The important boo.' by Margaret Wise Brown.I made a book like it on my own.I will introduce one of the pages.It's about book.'The important thing about book is that we read it.It is funny or sad. And sometimes it makes us happy.We can learn a lot in the book.There are lots of kinds.But the important thing about book is that we read it.'I wrote about mirror, chopsticks, fire and me too.It is hard work making a book.Because I have to make the cover and write many sentences.But I like it. 만든 책의 일부분입니다.
[그림책]The wheels on the bus go외 Transportation워크시트 
[영어일기]재윤이의 여행계획-첨삭지도 
