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2. Read the E & Shoemaker attached and compare it with our E & Storymaker. Finish the chart below.
The Elves & the Shoemaker
The Elves & the Storymaker
Main Characters
Shoemaker, wife
Story maker, wife
Helpers
Elves
Elves, gorillas, aliens
Real Helper
Elves
Wife
Problem
They are so poor, they have only leather to make one pair of shoe
The story maker dose not have single idea in his head..
Solution
Sell the shoes that the elves made.
Sell the story that the story makers wife made.
Conclusion
They became rich and lived happily ever after.
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3. Write your own conclusion for the blackened blank above. Please don¡¯t write like, ¡°They sold the story and made money. They lived happily ever after.¡± Please think of a good ending that nobody could imagine. Now you realize how hard it is to write a good story like the old storywriter felt in the story, don¡¯t you?
After the story maker published the story, the story maker said to his wife ¡°I think you should make stories.
I will find another job.¡±
So the wife became a story maker.
The husband looked for a job. And he found a job that he would like, A storyteller!!!
So the husband told story to kindergarten kids.
And the wife sold many story books, it became the bestseller!
And the husband told story very well, every kindergarten called him to tell stories.
So the wife and the husband became the richest couple in the world.
4. Write a poem like the one the helpers sang in the story. Imagine you & your friends are someone writing the end of the story for the storywriter at night. Make sure your poem has rhymes.
p. 10
We are
tiny little elves
We¡¯ll put stories
on your shelves.
p. 14
We are gorillas
big and hairy.
The middle bit
is really scary.
Your Own
We are people
Good and kind
We help anyone
To find,find,find!
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2. Read the E & Shoemaker attached and compare it with our E & Storymaker. Finish the chart below.
The Elves & the Shoemaker
The Elves & the Storymaker
Main Characters
Shoemaker, his wife
Storymaker, his wife
Helpers
Elves
Elves, Gorillas, aliens
Real Helper
Elves
His wife
Problem
Shoemaker needed to make some shoes.
Stortymaker did not have any single idea in his head
Solution
Elves made a shoe for him
His wife made a story for him.
Conclusion
He became very rich shoemaker by selling shoes.
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3. Write your own conclusion for the blackened blank above. Please don¡¯t write like, ¡°They sold the story and made money. They lived happily ever after.¡± Please think of a good ending that nobody could imagine. Now you realize how hard it is to write a good story like the old storywriter felt in the story, don¡¯t you?
Storymaker sold his book, And his book became bestseller.
He became a very famous person. His wife and he moved to the great big house and bought brand new computer.
They made some another story with brand new computer.
The name of the story was ¡®Harry potter¡¯.
They became to more famous.
Now they moved to Korea.
Because storymaker¡¯s grandpa and grandma were in Korea
They made a story company in Korea to be more rich.
And now they have 100,000,000 staff of his company.
4. Write a poem like the one the helpers sang in the story. Imagine you & your friends are someone writing the end of the story for the storywriter at night. Make sure your poem has rhymes.
p. 10
We are
tiny little elves
We¡¯ll put stories
on your shelves.
p. 14
We are gorillas
big and hairy.
The middle bit
is really scary.
Your Own
We are wizards of story.
We¡¯ll write the story like morning glory.
It will be beautiful story.
One day a lonely old man made a wooden doll using a crooked board in his backyard. His wife said, ¡°Yikes! It¡¯s too ugly and shabby. Nobody would want to play with it.¡± When the man finished the doll, it became alive and said.......
¡°Hello, my name is Rohn. I want my wife would you make her¡± ask Rohn. So he made another doll named ¡®Lily¡¯ . Lily and Rohn got merried and they lived with old man. But he didn¡¯t say it to his wife. Because she would not love lily and Rohn. The old man make them a baby doll named Tom. Oneday when the old man went outside his wife found Lily, Ron and Tom. Then she put them outside of her house. They were so angry. But they didn¡¯t know where was old man¡¯s house, so they went to find old man. They were very tired, but they finally found the old man.. They said everything to old man. And old man said to wife. ¡°Ok, Lily, and Tom can lived in out house¡± said his wife. Then they lived happily very long yesrs.
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2.
The Elves & the Shoemaker
The Elves & the Storymaker
Main Characters
Old Shoemaker & Elves
Old Silly storymaker & his wife
Helpers
Elves
Elves, Gorillas, Aliens
Real Helper
Elves
His wife
Problem
He was sleepy sleepy
He have not a new story
Solution
Elves make the shoes
His wife make the story
Conclusion
They became rich
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3.
3. Write your own conclusion for the blackened blank above. Please don¡¯t write like, ¡°They sold the story and made money. They lived happily ever after.¡± Please think of a good ending that nobody could imagine. Now you realize how hard it is to write a good story like the old storywriter felt in the story, don¡¯t you?
The old man sell the story book. But the price is very expensive. So people are not buy it.
Then one night, the thief steal the story book and thief sell the story by internet download.
The price is very cheap. So many people download it. The story book become famous.
But old man and his wife don't know about the internet download because they are too old.
They know the story book is disappeared so they make another story book. This time,
they copy the story book. But this time, the old man play and he don't make the story.
So his wife make the story all by her self. So she write only his name by writer.
So the old man is very angry about that. Finally they divorce. The old man take a copy
of story and sell it. But the old woman is faster than the old man. So old man catched by policeman. He go to the prison and old woman sell many stories and she become the rich.
4.
p. 10
We are
tiny little elves
We¡¯ll put stories
on your shelves.
p. 14
We are gorillas
big and hairy.
The middle bit
is really scary.
Your Own
We are big
smart computer
We will put silly
joke on the story


SSC #5 The Elves and the Storymaker
1. Read the text from page 4-11 out loud for 1 minute and let your mom check how many words you read. Count the words and draw a graph below. Try 4 times and see how faster you get. Oh, don¡¯t forget to read the dialogues in each page.
Word
count
249
249
250
251
250
230
210
190
170
150
130
110
90
70
50
1st try
2nd try
3rd try
4th try
2. Read the E & Shoemaker attached and compare it with our E & Storymaker. Finish the chart below.
The Elves & the Shoemaker
The Elves & the Storymaker
Main Characters
Shoemaker, elve
Storymaker, storymakers wife
Helpers
Elves
Elves, gorillas, aliens
Real Helper
Elves
Storymakers wife
Problem
They can¡¯t sold the shoe
They can¡¯t sold a story
Solution
Conclusion
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3. Write your own conclusion for the blackened blank above. Please don¡¯t write like, ¡°They sold the story and made money. They lived happily ever after.¡± Please think of a good ending that nobody could imagine. Now you realize how hard it is to write a good story like the old storywriter felt in the story, don¡¯t you?
They sold the story so they have big houses and live good
4. Write a poem like the one the helpers sang in the story. Imagine you & your friends are someone writing the end of the story for the storywriter at night. Make sure your poem has rhymes.
p. 10
We are
tiny little elves
We¡¯ll put stories
on your shelves.
p. 14
We are gorillas
big and hairy.
The middle bit
is really scary.
Your Own
We are __________________________
__________________________________
__________________________________
__________________________________
One day a lonely old man made a wooden doll using a crooked board in his backyard. His wife said, ¡°Yikes! It¡¯s too ugly and shabby. Nobody would want to play with it.¡± When the man finished the doll, it became alive and said.......
1. Read the text from page 4-11 out loud for 1 minute and let your mom check how many words you read. Count the words and draw a graph below. Try 4 times and see how faster you get. Oh, don¡¯t forget to read the dialogues in each page.
1st try : 184´Ü¾î
2nd try : 207´Ü¾î
3rd try : 206´Ü¾î
4th try : 223´Ü¾î
2. Read the E & Shoemaker attached and compare it with our E & Story maker. Finish the chart below.
The Elves & the Shoemaker
The Elves & the Story maker
Main Characters
Shoe maker
Story maker
Helpers
Elves
Elves, gorillas and aliens.
Real Helper
Elves
Story maker¡¯s wife
Problem
Shoe maker have to make money.
He wondered sadly, to buy his shoes.
Story maker have to make idea and write a book. But, he didn¡¯t have any ideas.
Solution
The elves helped shoe makers. Then shoe maker can sold his shoes.
The elves, gorillas and aliens helped story maker. When story maker went to kitchen, there was his wife.
Conclusion
The shoe maker made elves cloths and shoes. Elves and shoe maker was all happy.
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3. Write your own conclusion for the blackened blank above. Please don¡¯t write like, ¡°They sold the story and made money. They lived happily ever after.¡± Please think of a good ending that nobody could imagine. Now you realize how hard it is to write a good story like the old storywriter felt in the story, don¡¯t you?
Story maker and wife were happy to finish the book. Now, story maker had an idea. He wrote poem about himself. Then he made the poetry. The book was in ¡®BESTSELLER 3¡¯. It was ¡®BESTSELLER 2¡¯.
Story maker wrote one more book. The title was ¡®Elves are kind¡¯. Now story maker is famous. Poetry was ¡®BESTSELLER 1¡¯, and ¡®Elves are kind.¡¯ Was ¡®BESTSELLER 3¡¯. In whole world, who didn¡¯t know story maker is fool. Story maker is so famous. He¡¯s salary was 50000000 won.
He had an award. That was a ¡®Nobel literature award¡¯. So, they had a lot of money. Story maker and wife adoption the baby. They mad the baby¡¯s name. Name is this. ¡®Henrietta Jonson¡®. (She was a girl.)
Story maker is old, now. Everyday, he was in hospital. Wife and Henrietta take care of him. But, the story maker died. So, wife wrote the book everyday. She is famous too.
4. Write a poem like the one the helpers sang in the story. Imagine you & your friends are someone writing the end of the story for the storywriter at night. Make sure your poem has rhymes.
p. 10
We are
tiny little elves
We¡¯ll put stories
on your shelves.
p. 14
We are gorillas
big and hairy.
The middle bit
is really scary.
Your Own
We are writers
It¡¯s writer¡¯s time.
The end is about
Penney, nickel and dimes.
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