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Title: Danny and the champion of the world
SUBJECT: My dad is same as my life ( in danny¡¯s life)
When I was four years old, my mother had died.
My father had stop poaching from hazls¡¯s wood at that moment and vow he will last that until I could sleep alone.
But his vow had broken when I was 9 years old.
Poaching is bad but I could understand how much my dad loves me.
There is two reason that my father always poaching in hazs¡¯s wood.
One is most of pheasants are there and second is he hate him.
But, nonetheless my dad told me he will be empty he¡¯s house
I will be disappointed (except when he go in company)
Because he didn¡¯t think that I would be kidnapped by someone
If he did, I would accept he didn¡¯t love me 100%
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Date
05/01/10 Wed
Comment
Title/page
The BFG p.107-138
Subject
The plan and the queen
Sophie told BFG that we need to stop giants eating human bean. She suggested
to BFG to tell it to the queen of England. BFG said the queen will never believe them.
So she thought, tell the queen through the dream. The dream was like this¡¦..
"The queen saw the giants gobbling up the boys and girls. And she knew there was a
'Big Friendly Giant(BFG)' who can tell her where the giants live and help her capture
them. The girl named 'Sophie' will tell her where the BFG is hiding."
BFG can mix the dreams and make a new dream what he want to make.
So¡¦ he mixed the dream that 'Giants gobbling up human bean', 'Boys and girls'¡¦.
sort of things and he mixed all of them. The dream what BFG had made was a
nightmare! But BFG told Sophie the queen will be happy to think saving boys and
girls from the nasty giants. BFG and Sophie started the journey to the London.
Soon, BFG arrived at the queen's palace. He found the queen's bedroom and blew the
dream(nightmare) into her bedroom. Then, BFG put Sophie into the window and hide
in the garden.
–THE END-
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