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헉.. 이렇게 되는게 가능하단 말입니까?-0-

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정말...희망을 주시네요^^

와우 대단하세요~~~

저도 우리 아이 이렇게 되길 바라는데...되겠죠.

님 덕분에 희망이 생기네요...

와!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!진짜 대단하네요~~^^

엄마표 영어의 힘!~정말 대단하신단 말 밖에 안나옵니다.

이렇게까지 성장할 수 있도록 바다맘님께서 열심히 도와주시고 이끌어 주셨음이 안봐도 보여요

그 꾸준함에 박수 보내드립니다~^^

오호~~ 초3인데 이런 장문의 글을.....

부럽고, 대단합니다.

꾸준함을 이길 수 있는것은 없는듯합니다.

앞으로 더 좋은 결과 있을거예요.

수고 많으셨습니다.

짝짝짝!!!

제목:rainbow magic(new)

holly the christmas fairy written by 이@@

isn't it greate day? rachel worker said igery.

yes it's because we have found 7 weather fairy's feathers.

karsty tate said breathlessly.

and I think it will be a magical day she added.

and beside we have mat summer the hory day fairy and flora the fansy dress fairy and klliy the carnival fairy I think we will find another fairy.

rachel said grinning. rachel and kiarsty have mt at rainspell island.

and when they wor in rain spell the first time, they had met the rainbow fairys and have helped them by finding them. when they have gone second time in rainspell island they have met summer and have helped her to. they have helped a lot of fairies , but rachel had a feeling that they was going to help more fairy's today.

karsty pointed to a long line of people waiting to buy ticket, "do we have to wait in that line ? she asked rachel. rachel shrug she didn't know. rachel and karsty was going to see a movie since it was christmas. mrs worker had promised to watch a move about christmas. but there was lot's of people who wanted to watch a move about christmas. I better go and get tickets. you girls want to come along or do you want to stay behind. you could wait in these chairs. we will go with you. rachel said. yes karsty agreed. when they came to a ticket counter. the man who was selling ticket looked sad. sorry the move isn't working. but you could write your phone number so we could call you when the move is working. and you could get free tickets and seat in the front row. okay agreed mrs worker. mom can we play a little more longer outside? asked rachel. okay but be back in time for supper. rachel and karsty nodded. mrs worker went home. when the girls didn't see mrs worker any more rachel whispered to karsty it's definitely goblin mischief. yes agreed karsty. let's go to the park anyway. rachel said. when they reached the park there was no one around. rachel pushed the gate. but the gate didn't move. suddenly rachel spotted a sign. look it's closed. but I know that they open in sundays. they even have events. I loved the last event. I know. karsty said. what if this is goblin mischief. suddenly the girls could see fairy dust. rachel grind karsty I think a fairy has come. she said excitedly. yes said karsty as she pointed toward fairy dust. a fairy was coming toward them. rachel studied the fairy carefully. the fairy had long dark hair and blue eyes. she was wearing a red tabun , red skirt ,red boots. the fairy even had a red hat and a fan. who are you? asked karsty. i'm holly the christmas fairy. and you must be karsty and you must be rachel the fairy exclaimed. yes rachel said quickly. and do you need our help? she asked. the fairy nodded. the goblin's have my star. she said. the crystal star help that all of the humans are happy. and the roll up shell controls all of moves and park are grate fun. and the bonus star controls the christmas present's ar wonderful and the christmas tree decorations are great. but today we need to find a crystal star you will help me? won't you girls? holly asked as she floated gently on rachel's arm. of course we will. won't we karsty? rachel asked. karsty noded of course we will. and that's why all of the people are said and the park isn't opening and the move is getting all long and there isn't a very grate tree and we can't see a grate present karsty pointed out. and I think I know where the goblin is to she said laughing. the goblin must have been hiding inside the park. I was very cold when I tried to push the gates. oh that's wonderful. exclaimed holly let's get in to the gate right now. but how? asked karsty. it's easier if you are fairy size. oh I get it let's open our fairy locket rachel karsty exclaimed. rachel and karsty quickly opened there locket's and turned into fairies. then the girls and holly went inside and started to look for the goblin. he can't be far away. I have a feeling that my star isn't far away. suddenly rachel pulled holly and karsty up the tree. shh she said. I hear something behind the tree. it may be the goblin. suddenly something came out of the tree. rachel and karsty and holly gasped. and hided a few minutes later karsty peered out of the tree. then she poked holly and rachel and motioned them to come outside. it was a squirrel. she said. suddenly they herd something els and a very ugly laugh. quick girls. only goblins laugh like that holly pointed out. suddenly the girls heard a song. "la la la" who ever it is better lean how to sing. cried rachel as she cover her ears. only the goblins can sing like that karsty said. that's right holly said. I hear foot steps I hope it's not the goblin. but we have to hide. in case it's the goblin. holly pointed out. fellow me girls. holly called out cheerfully. they hided behind the tree branches. suddenly a green goblin came out behind the tree. the goblin passed the tree. and a cold bless filed the tree. and the tree started to freeze. quickly holly pulled rachel and karsty out of the tree. and hoped to the other tree. suddenly the goblin began to come towards them. rachel gasped. then she had a ida. maybe I can grab the star. no said holly the goblin is holding to tight of the star. he will spot us before we reach it for sure. I have another ida. if you magic us beck to normal. we can tickle the goblin and he will lose his feathers. and he will laugh. and will not notice holly making a lop. then holly will tie him and we can magic him beck to fairy lend. let's try it. said holly. holly waved her wand over rachel. she rushed over to the goblin and started to tickle him. hey what are you doing? the goblin asked between giggles. but rachel caped on tickling. finally karsty tied the goblin with the rope. hey let me out of here. I don't think so. karsty said. holly took the star and waved it. in the are. thank you girls. she said grinning. now I can take the goblin and the star to fairy lend. i'm not going to fairy lend. cried the goblin. but he was to late. holly waved her wand and the goblin vanished into seen air. holly smiled at the girls. thank you for helping me find my star girls. since I have my star beck all of the humans will be happy good by girls. holly said. smiling. and she disappeared to rachel grind at kairsty. it was a grate adventure karisty nodded I loved being a fairy. me too. rachel said.

헉~~~

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