초3/여/새라
Most of the kids like to play video(computer)games more than 1hour a day. However, I think playing too much video(computer)games are not good for us. Now, I will give you 3 reasons why I think it is bad for us.
The first reason why I think video(computer)games are not good is because it is sometimes violent. My brother likes to play a game called 'League of Legend'. I was watching the game, and it was very violent. The team had to kill the other team. Also, there was a space that we canchat with each other. The other team doesn't know who else is playing, so they just write bad words to others.I think because of that game, my brother is more violent and uses more bad words.
The second reason is because it is not healthy to our health. Video(computer)games are very fun, so we would like to do it for a long time. when we just sit on a chair, doing games, our neck, waist, and legs don't have to use power. So, we can get weak. Also, if we spend the night to do computer games, we can't sleep and the next day, our body has less energy and tired, we can't do our work propely.
The last reason is because we can get addicted to games. Last year, a boy was addicted to computer games and he killed hid brother. Then, he said"I killed him but there is no item."Like this, if we get addicted to games, we can get crazy and believe the bad information in games are true.
Of course games are fun, but I think playing too much games are not good.
초3/여/에밀리
I think video games are not a good thing to do.
First, according to a newspaper, a norwegian terrorist had enjoyed a video game called 'call of duty'. It is a game which the player goes into a airport in Russia and shoots gun to all the Russians. It made the terrorist think the game was real and made him kill 68 people. I want to say from this story that video games are using violence too much. There are many video games using violence. But adults are permitting children to do that. It will maybe make children be a murderer like this terrorist here. Also, playing too much games made this terrorist think that the game was real. I'm not positive about it, but we could be like that too. Therefore, I think video games have to be more peaceful and we have to play games using time limits.
Second, it makes student's health go worse. Students get to sleep less and play games instead of doing sports. Playing games instead of doing sports make the child plump than the ordinary children's size. Sleeping less and being plump definitely isn't a healthy thing to do. So I think we should rather do sports than playing video games.
Third, people who plays games risk their lives to get an item. I mean, they're desperate of getting an item. My friend, which I believe that he's been game poisoned, says that he'll risk his life if he could get an item. And there was a circumstance that a student hit another student and forced him to play games so the victim self-destructed. It was because the injurer wanted items very badly. So I think games would have to remove items out of the game.
Therefore, I think we shouldn't do video games very much.
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관련기사를 찾아서 읽어보고, 영작할 때 사전을 찾으면서 적긴 했는데,
다음엔 먼저 자신의 생각을 적어보고 기사를 검색해 보도록 해야겠단 생각이 들었어요.
관련 기사를 읽기전 그 주제에 대해 얼마만큼 생각을 할 수 있는지도 본인이 느껴야 할 것 같구요,
기사를 먼저 읽으니까 그 기사 내용쪽으로 많이 가게 되는 것은 아닌가 생각이 듭니다.^^
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초3/여/새라
I think video games are not good for us.
because they can make our concentration in everything bad and we can be addiction to video games so I think we can go outside and play with our friends then playing video games inside.

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초 4 여 Ginny
I think vidio games(includs phone game)are bad for you.
because in some vidio games,there are bad entertainments.such as bad words,garish vidios.
and most of all,you get hooked on vidio games.or worse,your eyes goes bad.
but if countrys make a kid-free vidio games,kids will be able to endure it.and things will get much better.
Sam 초2 남자
I think video games are not good for you.
video games are not good(even not including that my eyes are bad because of video games).
video games are not good because you can get hooked to them and losing more hours of studying.
and if you have many hours of video games, your eyes will go bad. and maybe you get too hooked to games that you would have no time to do anything else. but if you do video games for short times, I think it's okay.
초 3 채니
My Opinion: Video Games Are Not Good For You
Reason: The reason why video games are bad:
It makes you stay indoors all the time, so it gives you no time to be outdoors or to be healthy.
It makes you easily tired.
It makes your brain full of games, so it gives you headaches.
You couldn't concentrate well in class.
Sometimes it makes you angry even if someone talks to you.
You couldn't make friends.
Ryan 4학년 남자
의견 : YES ^^
In my view,I think web surfing and games are good for me.Because we can get rid of stress.
Many people said games and web surfing are not good to us.
But I have another opinion.
We can just tell to mom to watch me when I game.
So we just do games very fun until time ends.
When we do game, we can have a bad eyesight.
But if we keep the distance to 30cm, we will be okay.
So,I think, computer games and web surfing is good to us.