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- Dr. Hong
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- 2010-04-28 09:34
---------------- Homework due was last night ----------------
- lynn
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- 2010-04-28 00:33
Lynn이 내일 4학년 첫 중간고사를 본답니다. 벼락치기(?)하느라 지금까지 공부하고 이제야 올리네요.
시간이 너무 늦어서 제가 대신 타이핑했어요. 문제는 다 동일하니, 답만 편집했어요~
I will read first half in Saturday and later half on Sunday and Monday.
I read this book very fun. This book was teaching me so many good things.
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a friend.
3
How to make friends.
4
Playing on a team
5
How to be a friend
6
How to keep Friends
7
Things Friends Don’t Do
8
Be true to yourself
9
Do the right thing
10
Outsmarting a Bully
11
Having a best friend
12
Changing friends
13
Forever friends
14
Sharing friendship
Topic chosen: Outsmarting a Bully
Round
Elapsed Time
1
_______________min ______44________sec
2
_______________min _______40_______sec
3
_______________min ________38______sec
Friendship means having friends.
If my friend get hurt, I will say “Are you all right?”.
I will taking turns and being fair.
A good friend doesn’t fight with others.
Pretend it doesn’t bother me.
My best friend is Sun Joo. We go to school together, and do things together. She was one of good classmates when I was in 2nd grade. And we met again as a classmate when we were 4th graders. I was so happy when I saw her in my new classroom. And then we became a best friend!
- Dr. Hong
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- 2010-04-28 21:08
Excellent! I like to read about Sun Joo.
You know how to make a paragraph.
Through the paragraph you clearly wrote about
how you two became the best friends to each other.
But other answers are rather short though you are able to write in detail.
I hope you wirte longer next time.
Good job, Lynn.
Keep up the good work!
- Kate
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- 2010-04-29 01:54
넘 감동적이에요.
이 많은 글들에 하나하나 이리도 정성스런 코멘트를 달아주시다뉘.............
정말 존경합니다. ㅜㅜ
- 에디맘
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- 2010-04-28 00:26
1. Your Reading Plan
Are you going to read the whole book at once or spread it out over two or three days? I read the first half on Sunday and the later half on Saturday. Tell us your reading plan.
I will read a book on every Saturday.____.
If you already finished reading the book, how did you read?
I read ___________________________________________________________________________________.
2. Topics Telling the Theme
This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.
#
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a friend
3
How to make friends
4
Playing on a team
5
How to be a friend
6
How to keep friends
7
Things friends don't do
8
Be true to yourself
9
Do the right thing
10
Outsmarting a bully
11
Having a Best friend
12
Changing friends
13
Forever friends
14
Sharing friendship
3. Speed Reading Practice
Choose one topic you like and read it three times quickly. Time your each reading and record how long each round took. The speed reading practice helps you read a story quickly and exactly as well as you understand the meaning well.
Topic chosen: Having a best friend
Round
Elapsed Time
1
___________1____min ______________sec
2
_______________min ________50______sec
3
_______________min ________40______sec
4. Comprehension & Composition
Pick 3 questions and answer them. Write in complete sentences.
(# refers to the topic number you wrote above.)
(1) #1
What is friendship?
Friendship means having friends. Having a friend makes you feel happy inside.
(2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
I can say ‘hi’ or ‘hello’ to new friends. How about you?
I can listen carefully what my friends say.
(3) #5
Write how to be a friend. I will share my things with my friends. How about you?
I will help my friend when he needs me.
인사가 넘 늦었네요.초3아들이구요.이름은 에디에요.집안에 일이 좀 생겨 울아들이랑
허둥지둥 오늘했네요. 주말에 천천히 다시 해볼생각입니다. 날씨가 차네요. 감기 조심하세요.
- Dr. Hong
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- 2010-04-28 21:05
I like the idea when you said, 'I can listen carefully to what my friends say.'
Listening to others is a good way to be friends.
I hate a person who never stops saying and don't listen to me.
Eddie, you seemed to be busy when you wrote this because the answers are too short.
During the weekend, will you write more about (3) question?
How will you help your friend?
- Jennyapple
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- 2010-04-27 21:25
If you already finished reading the book, how did you read?
I read _through the book just at once. If I read a book for several days, I couldn't concentrate _on the book. .________________________________________________________________________________.
2. Topics Telling the Theme
This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a friend.
3
How to make friends.
4
playing on a team.
5
How to be a friend.
6
How to keep friends.
7
Things friend don't do.
8
Be true yourself.
9
Do the right thing.
10
Outsmarting a bully.
11
Having a best friend.
12
Changing friend.
13
Forever friend.
14
Sharing friendship
3. Speed Reading Practice
Topic chosen: _____Choosing a friend_____________________________________________
Round
Elapsed Time
1
_______________min ________28_.19_____sec
2
_______________min ______27.29________sec
3
_______________min ______21.72________sec
4. Comprehension & Composition
(1) #1
What is friendship?
Friendnship means having friends.
Rocks are as hard as our friendship
Ink is as deep as between friends.
ET is as mestrious as my friend.
Nothing could prevent between us except mother.
Don't dare to block between us.
Shoes make me feel safe like my friend.
Hay is as fluffy as my friend.
I'm happy because of my friend.
Past the corner of life, you could meet friends.
(4) #7
Write things a good friend doesn’t do.
A good friend must not lie each other.
Telling a lie would hurt other friends feeling.
(6) #
My best friend is Heesoo. We went to middle school together. We still see each other often and go on a trip together. Who is your best friend and what do you do with him or her?
I have many best friends. one of them is 언희. She is my first grade friend.
We played a lot and shared each other. Somtimes, she would eat my sclool lunch instead of me.
I moved into .here. but we are still best friends.
제가 컴맹인데요 대체 doc 이 파일에 글이 써지지 않아서 그 방도르 ㄹ찾느라 시간이 좀..
우짯든 아이가 글을 쓰면 글자 간격이 엄청나게 벌어진다는 통에...암튼 많이 늦었습니다
- Kate
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- 2010-04-28 13:46
- Dr. Hong
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- 2010-04-28 20:59
Wow, amazing!
It's amazing to write a poem for (1) question.
I seems like you've read very many books so far.
I can see it well because you used many beautiful words.
And I'm glad you know how to write a story.
Writing is like a telling a fun story to people around you.
So the story must be fun.
Otherwise, people might get bored and don't want to pay attention.
Your wrting was very interesting.
Once I started reading, I wanted to keep reading to the end.
Good job, Jenny.
Keep up the good work!
- Jennyapple
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- 2010-05-01 00:18
Actuallly I don't really like writing, I like making poems more than that.
By the way Dr. there is a secreat in this poem,would you like to find the secreat?
- Lucy
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- 2010-04-27 21:15
1. Your Reading Plan
I read the first half on Monday and the later half on Tuesday
2. Topics Telling the Theme
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a friend
3
How to make friends
4
Playing on a team
5
How to be friend
6
How to keep friend
7
Things friend don’t’ do
8
Be true to yourself
9
Do the right thing
10
Outsmarting a bully
11
Having a best friend
12
Changing friend
13
Forever friend
14
Sharing friendship
3. Speed Reading Practice
Topic chosen:
_Having a best friend_
Round
Elapsed Time
1
55__sec
2
42__sec
3
40__sec
4. Comprehension & Composition
(1) #1
What is friendship?
The friendship is means having friends.
(2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
I can say ‘hi’ or ‘hello’ to new friends. How about you?
I can say hi and smile.
(3) #5
Write how to be a friend.
I will take turns.
(4) #7
Write things a good friend doesn’t do.
I think a good friend doesn’t bite
(5) #10
When I was in first grade, a big tall boy always teased me. I cried and told it to my teacher.
But he didn’t stop bullying me. What does this book say about how to treat a bully?
Say “whatever”.
(6) #
Who is your best friend and what do you do with him or her?
My best friend is yoojin. . And we play together.
오늘 아이가 중간고사를 치르고 친구들이랑 정신없이 노느라 이제야 숙제를 올립니다.
- Dr. Hong
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- 2010-04-28 20:54
I hope you had luck on your exam.
I can see you're a good reader because you answered all the questions right.
But it would have been much better if you had written in detail.
You said Yoojin is your best friend.
I don't think playing is the only thing you do with her.
Tell me more about Yoojin so that I can see who she is.
- Lucy
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- 2010-04-30 20:28
Or make something.(We made book maker,litte books.)
And,school game.
- Dr. Hong
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- 2010-04-30 22:12
Now I figured how much you two have fun.
- keira
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- 2010-04-27 20:11
1. Your Reading Plan
Are you going to read the whole book at once or spread it out over two or three days? I read the first half on Sunday and the later half on Saturday. Tell us your reading plan.
I will read the book on friday
If you already finished reading the book, how did you read?
I read read
2. Topics Telling the Theme
This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a Friend
3
How to make a Friends
4
Playing on Team
5
How to be a Friend
6
How to keep Friends
7
Things friends don’t do
8
Be True to yourself
9
Do the right thing
10
Outsmarting a Bully
11
Having a Best Friend
12
Changing Friends
13
Forever Friends
14
Sharing friendship
3. Speed Reading Practice
Choose one topic you like and read it three times quickly. Time your each reading and record how long each round took. The speed reading practice helps you read a story quickly and exactly as well as you understand the meaning well.
Topic chosen: playing on a team
Round
Elapsed Time
1
__________1_____min 36sec
2
________1_______min 30 sec
3
_________1______min 49 sec
4. Comprehension & Composition
Pick 3 questions and answer them. Write in complete sentences.
(# refers to the topic number you wrote above.)
(1) #1
What is friendship?
"friendship" means having a friend.
(2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
I can say ‘hi’ or ‘hello’ to new friends. How about you?
I can say 'hi' or 'hello' to new friends
(3) #5
Write how to be a friend. I will share my things with my friends. How about you?
I will play with my friends many time.
(4) #7
Write things a good friend doesn’t do. I would say ‘A good friend doesn’t hurt others.’
I would say 'a good friend doesn't say bad thing to friends'
(5) #10
When I was in first grade, a big tall boy always teased me. I cried and told it to my teacher.
But he didn’t stop bullying me. What does this book say about how to treat a bully?
pretend it dosen't bother me
(6) #
My best friend is Heesoo. We went to middle school together. We still see each other often and go on a trip together. Who is your best friend and what do you do with him or her?
My best friend is yeah rin. we were same class 1 year ago. we often play togehter
- Dr. Hong
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- 2010-04-28 20:51
Good job! I like the way you answered the questions.
You must have read the book very carefully.
So you and Yeah Rin have been in the same class for a year.
Well you have many other kids in the same class.
But YeahRin has been special to you, right?
Why is she special? Tell me about it.
- diana
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- 2010-04-27 17:38
.
Are you going to read the whole book at once or spread it out over two or three days? I read the first half on Sunday and the later half on Saturday. Tell us your reading plan.
I will read first half on Saturday and the iater half on Monday_.___________________________________________________________________________
If you already finished reading the book, how did you read?
I read ___________________________________________________________________________________.
2. Topics Telling the Theme
This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a friend
3
How to make friend
4
Playing on a Team
5
How to Be a friend
6
How to keep friend
7
Things friend don’t do
8
Be true right thing
9
Do the right thing
10
Outsmarting a bully
11
Having d best friend
12
Changing friends
13
Forever friend
14
Sharing friendship
Choose one topic you like and read it three times quickly. Time your each reading and record how long each round took. The speed reading practice helps you read a story quickly and exactly as well as you understand the meaning well.
Topic chosen: What is friendship?
Round
Elapsed Time
1
_______1________min ____42__________sec
2
_______1________min ____19_________sec
3
________1_______min ______14________sec
4. Comprehension & Composition
Pick 3 questions and answer them. Write in complete sentences.
(# refers to the topic number you wrote above.)
(1) #1
What is friendship?
“friendship’ means having friends.
(2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
I can say ‘hi’ or ‘hello’ to new friends. How about you?
(3) #5
Write how to be a friend. I will share my things with my friends. How about you?
I will help my friend in trouble.
(4) #7
Write things a good friend doesn’t do. I would say ‘A good friend doesn’t hurt others.’
I would say “ A good friend doesn’t yell”
(5) #10
When I was in first grade, a big tall boy always teased me. I cried and told it to my teacher.
But he didn’t stop bullying me. What does this book say about how to treat a bully?
(6) #
My best friend is Heesoo. We went to middle school together. We still see each other often and go on a trip together. Who is your best friend and what do you do with him or her?
My best friend is yun seo Lee.
I do Mother and father role play with her.
겨우 대신 타이핑 했습니다 마지막 문장은 엄마 아빠 놀이를 한다는 뜻이거 같은데 맞는지는 저도 잘 모르겠네요
딸래미 때문에 컴맹 탈출해야겠네요.사실 저는 컴터에서 쑥쑥과 학교홈피 네이버 정도만 보거든요..
- Dr. Hong
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- 2010-04-28 20:48
Good job! You got all right.
You must have read the book very carefully.
And thank you sharing the story about YunSeo.
When you do the role play, who plays the mother and who plays the father?
What to the mother and father do? Tell me about it.
- Angela
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- 2010-04-27 10:14
1. Your Reading Plan
Are you going to read the whole book at once or spread it out over two or three days? I read the first half on Sunday and the later half on Saturday. Tell us your reading plan.
I will read the book on saturday.
If you already finished reading the book, how did you read?
I read read just on saturday.
2. Topics Telling the Theme
This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a Friend
3
How to make a Friends
4
Playing on Team
5
How to be a Friend
6
How to keep Friends
7
Things friends don’t do
8
Be True to yourself
9
Do the right thing
10
Outsmarting a Bully
11
Having a Best Friend
12
Changing Friends
13
Forever Friends
14
Sharing friendship
3. Speed Reading Practice
Choose one topic you like and read it three times quickly. Time your each reading and record how long each round took. The speed reading practice helps you read a story quickly and exactly as well as you understand the meaning well.
Topic chosen: Having a Best Friend
Round
Elapsed Time
1
_______________min 45 sec
2
_______________min 37 sec
3
_______________min 43 sec
4. Comprehension & Composition
Pick 3 questions and answer them. Write in complete sentences.
(# refers to the topic number you wrote above.)
(1) #1
What is friendship?
Friendship means having a friend.
(2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
I can say ‘hi’ or ‘hello’ to new friends. How about you?
I can smile to her. I can say ‘let’s be a friend’.
(3) #5
Write how to be a friend. I will share my things with my friends. How about you?
I’ll help my friends. I ask Do you want to borrow this?
(4) #7
Write things a good friend doesn’t do. I would say ‘A good friend doesn’t hurt others.’
A good friend doesn’t make fun at others.
(5) #10
When I was in first grade, a big tall boy always teased me. I cried and told it to my teacher.
But he didn’t stop bullying me. What does this book say about how to treat a bully?
Play near other kids or near the adult on the playground.
(6) #
My best friend is Heesoo. We went to middle school together. We still see each other often and go on a trip together. Who is your best friend and what do you do with him or her?
My best friend is Gloria. She is nice. I play with her. I want to play with her every day.
- Dr. HOng
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- 2010-04-28 20:35
That's right! A good friend doesn't make fun of others.
You seemed to read the book very well.
I have a question:
Have ever been sad becasue someone tease or bother you?
If yes, please write about it. If not, lucky you!
- Angela
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- 2010-05-04 14:15
There is! That name is Tom.
He and me are same english school and same elementary school.
I don't like him to hit me.
That is why he hit to me!
- niki
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- 2010-04-27 09:32
1. Your Reading Plan
If you already finished reading the book, how did you read?
I read the book on Thursday and Friday.
2. Topics Telling the Theme
This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a friend
3
How to make friends
4
Playing on a team
5
How to be a friends
6
How to keep friend
7
Things friends don’t do
8
Be true to yourself
9
Do the right thing
10
Outsmarting a bully
11
Having a best friend
12
Changing friends
13
Forever friends
14
Sharing friendship
3. Speed Reading Practice
Topic chosen: ______Outsmarting a bully___________________________
Round
Elapsed Time
1
___________1____min __________1____sec
2
_______________min __________58____sec
3
_______________min _________55_____sec
4. Comprehension & Composition
(1) #1
What is friendship?
If I want to play in playground but my friend want to play a soccer we should have you 10 minute and me 10 minute to play.
(2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
I can say ‘hi’ or ‘hello’ to new friends. How about you?
I would say hello or hi or what is your name ? or let’s play !
(6) #
My best friend is Heesoo. We went to middle school together. We still see each other often and go on a trip together. Who is your best friend and what do you do with him or her?
My best friend is se chan hong. He is my best friend because we are same class in elementary school.
- Dr. Hong
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- 2010-04-28 20:29
You read very fast. A person who reads a text quickly usually means he is a good reader.
Being a good reader means you can be a good writier, too.
Next time when you write, please write more about each topic.
For example, for Sechang, you can tell us what you do with him
and how he makes you feel when he's around.
Going to school together might not be a single reason to be the best freind.
I hope to hear from you more about Sechang.
- kate
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- 2010-04-26 22:10
1.
If you already finished reading the book, how did you read?
I read it for five days.
책 속의 소제목을 써보세요. 책 전체의 주제 전달을 휘애 어떻게 내용을 전개했는지 알 수 있습니다. 또 copying이라는 기초 작문 활동도 됩니다.
2.
This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a friends
3
How to make friends
4
Playing on a team
5
How to be a friend
6
How to keep friends
7
Things friends don’t do
8
Be true to yourself
9
Do the right thing
10
Outstanding a bully
11
Having a best friend
12
Changing friends
13
Forever friends
14
Sharing friendship
3.
Choose one topic you like and read it three times quickly. Time your each reading and record how long each round took. The speed reading practice helps you read a story quickly and exactly as well as you understand the meaning well.
Topic chosen: Playing on a team
Round
Elapsed Time
1
_______________min _____28_________sec
2
_______________min _____24_________sec
3
_______________min _____20_________sec
질문에 두세 문장으로 답하세요. 지시에 답하다 보면 작문이 됩니다.
너무 많으니 3개만 골라서 하세요. 밑줄 친 부분이 예입니다.
해당 토픽을 읽으면 답이 있습니다. 이를 활용해서 문장을 만드세요.
4.
Pick 3 questions and answer them. Write in complete sentences.
(# refers to the topic number you wrote above.)
(1) #1
What is friendship?
Friendship means having friends and being friends
(2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
I can say ‘hi’ or ‘hello’ to new friends. How about you?
I smile and ask friend’s name
(5) #10
When I was in first grade, a big tall boy always teased me. I cried and told it to my teacher.
But he didn’t stop bullying me. What does this book say about how to treat a bully?
If a bully is teasing me, pretend it doesn’t bother me.
- Dr. Hong
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- 2010-04-28 20:06
You got all answers right.
Finding the answers from reading a book is excellent.
I have a question: Why does it work pretending not to be bothered by a bully?
What if a bully keeps saying, "Hey, Kate, you stupid girl!"?
And you act like that's nothing.
Do you think the bully will stop teasing you any more?
Why?
- kate
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- 2010-05-03 22:32
- 휘윤이
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- 2010-04-26 20:27
1. Your Reading Plan
If you already finished reading the book, how did you read?
I will read whole book at once on Tuesday.
2. Topics Telling the Theme
This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a friends
3
How to make friends
4
Play on a team
5
How to be a friend
6
How to keep friends
7
Thing friends don’t do
8
Be true to your self
9
Do the right thing
10
Out smarting a bully
11
Having a best friends
12
Changing friends
13
Forever friends
14
Sharing friendship
3. Speed Reading Practice
Topic chosen: What is friendship?
Round
Elapsed Time
1
_______1________min ______5_______sec
2
_______________min ______59________sec
3
_______________min ______52________sec
4. Comprehension & Composition
(1) #1 What is friendship?
Friendship is to play with her.
Friendship is to help friends.
Friendship is do not fight with friends.
(2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
I introduce my name to my new friend.
I will ask my new friends name.
I’ll say “Let’s be a good friend.”
(3) #5
Write how to be a friend.
I’ll share my pencil with my friend.
I’ll give a present for my friend.
I’ll play a game with my friend.
(4) #7
Write things a good friend doesn’t do.
A good friend doesn’t fight.
A good friend doesn’t say bad wards.
A good friend doesn’t teas a friend.
(5) #10
When I was in first grade, a big tall boy always teased me. I cried and told it to my teacher.
But he didn’t stop bullying me. What does this book say about how to treat a bully?
Pretend it doesn’t bother you.
Tell you teacher or parents.
I’ll say “Don’t do it!”
(6) #
My friend is Hyun soo. She and I play together and sleepover together.
We went to Everland. We ate some many thing likes chocolate, cnady and lunch together.
“Let’s be a good friend forever~!”
- Dr. Hong
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- 2010-04-27 23:09
I'm amazed at your writing!
I like when you write answer in detail like (3) & (6).
I especially like the story about Hyunsoo in (6).
You wrote what you did with he in a them park.
I hope you and Hyusoo will be good friends to each other forever.
- eddie
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- 2010-04-26 17:33
에디가 어제 해놓고 간거 이제야 스캔떠서 올립니다. ^^; 매일 읽고 듣기만 했지 필기는 한번도 안해보다 첨 해보네요.. 어설퍼요...
- Dr. Hong
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- 2010-04-27 23:04
Wow, I like your handwritng.
And I like your reading plan, too.
Reading a bit everyday is a very good way to be a good reader.
Now I'll tell you how to be a good wrtier.
When you write to my questions, write in detail.
For example, if you say, 'I'll make my friends smile,' tell me how.
Will you give him ice cream, or will you fart? :)
I want to hear about how you will make others smile.
- SUE
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- 2010-04-26 13:16
I will read ____ the first half on Thursday and the later half on Sunday.
If you already finished reading the book, how did you read?
I read ______ the first half on Saturday and ___the later half on Sunday.
2. Topics Telling the Theme
This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
What Is Friendship?
3
Choosing a Friend.
4
How to Make Friend.
5
Playing on a Team.
6
How to Be a Friend.
7
How to Keep Friends.
8
Things Friends Don’t Do.
9
Be True to Yourself.
10
Do the Right Thing.
11
Outsmarting a Bully
12
Having a Best Friend
13
Changing Friends
14
Forever Friends
3. Speed Reading Practice
Topic chosen: __________________________________________________________
Round
Elapsed Time
1
____________0___min _______35_______sec
2
_________0______min _________30_____sec
3
_____________0__min ________25______sec
(1) #1
What is friendship?
''Friendship' means having friends. Everyone needs friendship in his or her life.
(2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
I can say ‘hi’ or ‘hello’ to new friends. How about you?
Ican always have a 'fun attitude'.
(
3) #5
Write how to be a friend. I will share my things with my friends. How about you?
Iwill do nice things for my friend. If she got bad score on the test, I would tell her she’ll be better next time.
(4) #7
Write things a good friend doesn’t do. I would say ‘A good friend doesn’t hurt others.’
I would say ' A good friend doesn't say bad thing about dthers.
(5) #10
When I was in first grade, a big tall boy always teased me. I cried and told it to my teacher.
But he didn’t stop bullying me. What does this book say about how to treat a bully?
You pretend doesn’t bother you. Or join up with another Kid.
(6) #
My best friend is Heesoo. We went to middle school together. We still see each other often and go on a trip together. Who is your best friend and what do you do with him or her?
My best friend is JI-SU. We went to Elementry school together. We play and do all things together.
아침에 학교가기전에 써놓은걸 엄마인 제가 올립니다. 빠진부분이 있거나 보충할 게 있으면 다시올리라고 할게요..
파일첨부가 아니라 좀 불편한데 좀더 쉬운방법은 없을까요? 컴맹끼가 있어서 열심히 복사, 붙이기만 반복했네요..
- Dr. Hong
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- 2010-04-27 22:59
I like the way you answer for (3) question.
You wrote a detail sentence to your answer.
I really like it!!
Then could you write more about (6) question, too?
It's too short.
Probably you wer busy going to school.
- Blossom
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- 2010-04-26 10:42
1. Your Reading Plan
Are you going to read the whole book at once or spread it out over two or three days? I read the first half on Sunday and the later half on Saturday. Tell us your reading plan.
I will read ”Learning to be a good friend” on Sunday afternoon with my mom.
If you already finished reading the book, how did you read?
I read ___________________________________________________________________________________.
2. Topics Telling the Theme
This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a Friend
3
How to make friends
4
Playing on a team
5
How to be a friend
6
How to keep friends
7
Things friends don’t do
8
Be true to yourself
9
Do the right thing
10
Outsmarting a bully
11
Having a best friend
12
Changing Friends
13
Forever friends
14
Sharing friendship
3. Speed Reading Practice
Choose one topic you like and read it three times quickly. Time your each reading and record how long each round took. The speed reading practice helps you read a story quickly and exactly as well as you understand the meaning well.
Topic chosen: Plyaing on a Team
Round
Elapsed Time
1
_______________min ___50’76_____sec
2
_______________min ___47’11_____sec
3
_______________min ___45’03_____sec
4. Comprehension & Composition
Pick 3 questions and answer them. Write in complete sentences.
1)) #1 What is friendship?
Friendship means having friends. Everyone needs friendship in his or her life.
(2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
I can say ‘hi’ or ‘hello’ to new friends. How about you?
I can wait until she fihsnish she’s cleaning up my classroom and we are going together at Piano Class.
(3) #5
Write how to be a friend. I will share my things with my friends. How about you?
I will talk to with my friends first.
(6) #
My best friend is Heesoo. We went to middle school together. We still see each other often and go on a trip together. Who is your best friend and what do you do with him or her?
My best friend is J.J.W (Cindy).
We go elementull school.
We’re doing math together.
We’re having lunch together.
We’re talking and teezing each other (sometimes)
- Dr. Hong
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- 2010-04-27 22:54
Cherry flowers are in full blossom now.
Thank you for sharing the story about Cindy.
You do lots of things together with her.
Oh, you don't have to use 'be ~ing.' here.
Just say we do math, have lunch together, talk with each other....
Please check the spelling 'elementary' and 'tease.'
Good job!
- Yena
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- 2010-04-26 06:38
1. Your Reading Plan
If you already finished reading the book, how did you read?
I read fun and good.
2. Topics Telling the Theme
This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a friend.
3
How to make friends.
4
Playing on a team
5
How to be a friend.
6
How to keep friends.
7
Things friends don’t do.
8
Be true to yourself.
9
Do the right thing.
10
Outsmarting a Bully.
11
Having a best friend.
12
Changing friends.
13
Forever friends.
14
Sharing friendship
3. Speed Reading Practice
Topic chosen: Choosing a friend
Round
Elapsed Time
1
_______________min ____41________sec
2
_______________min ______33______sec
3
_______________min ______30______sec
4. Comprehension & Composition
(1) #1
What is friendship?
Friendship is sharing, taking turns, and being fair.
(2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
I can say ‘hi’ or ‘hello’ to new friends. How about you?
I say hi or hello.
(3) #5
Write how to be a friend. I will share my things with my friends. How about you?
I play with my friends.
(4) #7
Write things a good friend doesn’t do. I would say ‘A good friend doesn’t hurt others.’
I would say a good friend doesn’t lie.
(5) #10
When I was in first grade, a big tall boy always teased me. I cried and told it to my teacher.
But he didn’t stop bullying me. What does this book say about how to treat a bully?
I say “I heard that one in kindergarten” or “whatever”.
(6) #
My best friend is Heesoo. We went to middle school together. We still see each other often and go on a trip together. Who is your best friend and what do you do with him or her?
My best friend is Amy. We play at the park.
- Dr. Hong
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- 2010-04-27 22:47
I'm glad you read the book very well.
I can see it because your answers are all from the book.
Reading a book carefull is a very good way to be a good reader.
But I wanted hear about you when I asked the question (2).
You just said, 'I say hi or hello.'
Then what will you do?
Saying hello is not enough to be a very good frriend.
Can you tell me what you will do after you say hello?
- Sophie
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- 2010-04-25 22:11
1. Your Reading Plan
Are you going to read the whole book at once or spread it out over two or three days? I read the first half on Sunday and the later half on Saturday. Tell us your reading plan.
I will read the whole book at once.
If you already finished reading the book, how did you read?
I read
2. Topics Telling the Theme
This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a friend.
3
How to make friends.
4
Playing on a team.
5
How to be friend.
6
How to keep friends.
7
Things friends don’t do.
8
Be true yourself.
9
Do the right thing.
10
Out smarting a bully.
11
Having a best friend.
12
Changing friends.
13
Forever friends.
14
Sharing friendship
3. Speed Reading Practice
Choose one topic you like and read it three times quickly. Time your each reading and record how long each round took. The speed reading practice helps you read a story quickly and exactly as well as you understand the meaning well.
Topic chosen: What is friendship?
Round
Elapsed Time
1
_______________min ___38_ sec
2
_______________min ___35__ sec
3
_______________min ___32___sec
4. Comprehension & Composition
Pick 3 questions and answer them. Write in complete sentences.
(# refers to the topic number you wrote above.)
(1) #1
What is friendship?
‘Friendship means having friends.
(2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
I can say ‘hi’ or ‘hello’ to new friends. How about you?
I can pick a person and talk to each other.
(3) #5
Write how to be a friend. I will share my things with my friends. How about you?
I will say nice word to my friend.
I will read books with my friend.
I will play games with my friend.
(4) #7
Write things a good friend doesn’t do. I would say ‘A good friend doesn’t hurt others.’
A good friend doesn’t say bad words to others.
(5) #10
When I was in first grade, a big tall boy always teased me. I cried and told it to my teacher.
But he didn’t stop bullying me. What does this book say about how to treat a bully?
Pretend it doesn’t bother you.
(6) #
My best friend is Heesoo. We went to middle school together. We still see each other often and go on a trip together. Who is your best friend and what do you do with him or her?
My best friend is Jenny. We went to Primary school together. We play and talk together.
- Dr. Hong
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- 2010-04-27 22:41
Your English skills are good.
But I want to hear more abour you.
About $5, how will you play with your friends?
Tell me how you will do and how that will be good to be a friend.
This is an example:
I will watch TV with my friend.
After watching it , we can talk about it.
Then we know the same story and will talk about it again anytime.
I think good friends share good memories.
The show on TV will be a memeory to us.
I hope to hear this kind of story of yours next time.
- 수민
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- 2010-04-25 16:27
Are you going to read the whole book at once or spread it out over two or three days? I read the first half on Sunday and the later half on Saturday. Tell us your reading plan.
I will read whole book on Saturday.
If you already finished reading the book, how did you read?
I read ___________________________________________________________________________________.
2. Topics Telling the Theme
This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a friend.
3
How to make friends.
4
Playing on a team
5
How to be a friend
6
How to keep friends
7
Things friends don’t do
8
Be true to yourself
9
Do the right thing
10
Outsmarting a Bully
11
Having a best friend
12
Changing friends
13
Forever friends
14
Sharing friendship
Choose one topic you like and read it three times quickly. Time your each reading and record how long each round took. The speed reading practice helps you read a story quickly and exactly as well as you understand the meaning well.
Topic chosen: playing on a team
Round
Elapsed Time
1
_______________ min 33 sec
2
_______________min 32 sec
3
_______________min 34 sec
4. Comprehension & Composition
Pick 3 questions and answer them. Write in complete sentences.
(# refers to the topic number you wrote above.)
(1) #1
What is friendship?
‘Friendship’ means having friends.
(2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
I can say ‘hi’ or ‘hello’ to new friends. How about you?
Kids playing a game, and a kid makes a good move, I can say “Nice Shot”
(4) #7
Write things a good friend doesn’t do. I would say ‘A good friend doesn’t hurt others.’
Good friend doesn’t punch, kick, bite, or scratch each others.
And don’t make fun of others.
- Dr. Hong
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- 2010-04-27 22:31
You got all answers right.
You seemed to read the book carefully
and you know how to fidn the answer from the book.
Very good.
Next time when you wirte, can you add your idea to the answer?
It would be more fun if I could hear more about you.
Good job, Sumin.
Do you enjoy your new house?
- 박뱅이
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- 2010-04-24 21:46
1. Your Reading Plan
Are you going to read the whole book at once or spread it out over two or three days? I read the first half on Sunday and the later half on Saturday. Tell us your reading plan.
I will the whole book at once.
2. Topics Telling the Theme
This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a friend
3
How to make friends
4
Playing on a team
5
How to be a friend
6
How to keep friends
7
Things friends don’t do
8
Be true to yourself
9
Do the right thing
10
Outsmarting a bully
11
Having a best friend
12
Changing friends
13
Forever friends
14
Sharing friendship
3. Speed Reading Practice
Choose one topic you like and read it three times quickly. Time your each reading and record how long each round took. The speed reading practice helps you read a story quickly and exactly as well as you understand the meaning well.
Topic chosen: playing on a team.
Round
Elapsed Time
1
_______________min _____40______sec
2
_______________min _______32_____sec
3
_______________min ________30____sec
4. Comprehension & Composition
Pick 3 questions and answer them. Write in complete sentences.
(# refers to the topic number you wrote above.)
(1) #1
What is friendship?
Having a friend makes you feel happy inside
(2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
I can say ‘hi’ or ‘hello’ to new friends. How about you?
I be kind to friend
(3) #5
Write how to be a friend. I will share my things with my friends. How about you?
Play a game
- Dr. Hong
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- 2010-04-27 21:30
Well, you got all answers right but they are too short.
Could you write more about 'how you will be nice to your firends?'
Will you give your toy or lend game CDs?
Tell me more, please.
- Edward
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- 2010-04-24 21:41
I will read the book in four days.
on Thursday,Friday,Saturday,and Sunday.
2. Topics Telling the Theme
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a friend
3
How to make friends
4
Playing on a team
5
How to be a friend
6
How to keep friends
7
Things friends don't do
8
Be true to yourself
9
Do the right thing
10
Outsmarting a bully
11
Having a best friend
12
Changing friends
13
Foever friends
14
Sharing friendship
Topic chosen: What is a friend ship?
Round
Elapsed Time
1
_______________min ________39____sec
2
_______________min ______36____sec
3
_______________min ______36______sec
4. Comprehension & Composition
(1) #1
What is friendship?
Friendshep is having friends.We all need friendshep en all life.
(2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
We can'not fight or hurt friends. And we can give friends a food or share some thing good.
(3) #5
Write how to be a friend. How about you?
I will try to keep playing with friends.
(4) #7
Write things a good friend doesn’t do.
A good friends share with other friends. And, never use a bqd word.
(5) #10
What does this book say about how to treat a bully?
When the Bully teased us, pretend that's not bothering us.
(6) #
Who is your best friend and what do you do with him or her?
My best friend is ki-huan. We were best friend in first grade. We still play out side.
p.s. I need to go bad now. tomorow, I need to wake up 7:00 in the morning !!
- Dr. Hong
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- 2010-04-27 21:25
You think sharing good foods is a way to be nice to others.
I very much agree to your idea.
When I cook special foods like dumplings (mandoo) or bean paste cakes (bindaeduk),
I share them with my neighboring friends.
When did you give a food to a friend and he felt good about it?
Or have someone given you a food and you felt happy?
Tell me more about sharing good foods.
- Annie
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- 2010-04-24 16:00
I will read the whole book on Saturday.
2. Topics Telling the Theme
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a friend
3
How to make friends
4
Playing on a team
5
How to be a friend
6
How to keep friends
7
Things friends don't do
8
Be true to yourself
9
Do the right thing
10
Outsmarting a bully
11
Having a best friend
12
Changing friends
13
Foever friends
14
Sharing friendship
Topic chosen: ________How to be a friend_______
Round
Elapsed Time
1
_______________min ________52____sec
2
_______________min ______39____sec
3
_______________min ______33______sec
4. Comprehension & Composition
(1) #1
What is friendship?
Friendship is playing each other and having fun with friends.
(2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
I can tell my friends when they do good things at playing a game, I would say "Nice shot".
(3) #5
Write how to be a friend. How about you?
I will take turns with my friends at ball game.
(4) #7
Write things a good friend doesn’t do.
I would not make fun with my friends. And never use mean names or say bad things about someone behind her back.
(5) #10
What does this book say about how to treat a bully?
Say, "I heard that one in kindergarten" or "Whatever". And you don't get upset, it takes the fun out of it and the bully will stop.
(6) #
Who is your best friend and what do you do with him or her?
My best friend is WonHee. We go to the same school. We often see each other at piano lessons. And we play roller skates together at playground.
- 홍박샘
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- 2010-04-27 21:12
You know how to tell a story, which means you know how to wirte a paragraph.
Then could you wirte a few more sentences about #1?
I want your idea.
You said, 'Friendship is playing with friends, having fun together.'
Tell me how you have fun with friends.
What do you do when you watch TV together?
What do you do when you play ball or draw pictures together?
Tell me what you two said, and how you felt when you had fun.
- Kelly
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- 2010-04-24 12:30
1. Your Reading Plan
I will read _on Monday , Wednesday, Friday.
2. Topics Telling the Theme
This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a friend
3
How to make friends
4
Playing on a team
5
How to be a friend
6
How to keep friends
7
Things friends don` t do
8
Be true to yourself
9
Do the right thing
10
Outsmarting bully
11
Having a best friend
12
Changing friends
13
Forever friends
14
Sharing friendship
3. Speed Reading Practice
Topic chosen: _Thing friends don`t do
Round
Elapsed Time
1
_______________min ____43__________sec
2
_______________min _____41_________sec
3
_______________min ____36__________sec
4. Comprehension & Composition
Pick 3 questions and answer them. Write in complete sentences.
(# refers to the topic number you wrote above.)
(1) #1
What is friendship?
The friendship means having friends.
Having a friend makes me feel happy inside.
(2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
I say “hi” or “hello” and say “Let`s play together.” To new friends.
(3) #5
Write how to be a friend.
I will do nice thing for my friend.
(4) #7
Write things a good friend doesn’t do.
A good friend dosen`t use mean name, or say bad things behind her back.
(5) #10
When I was in first grade, a big tall boy always teased me. I cried and told it to my teacher.
But he didn’t stop bullying me. What does this book say about how to treat a bully?
The book said bullies don`t usually bother grups of kids.
- 홍박샘
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- 2010-04-27 21:03
Hope you enjoy the book.
About #3 you said you will do nice things to your friend.
What I wanted to hear was 'what nice things are and how you do those things.'
If you just said 'nice things' I wound't know what you would do to your friend.
Will you watch TV, or will you help her when she's in trouble?
Tell me in detail and I woudl enjoy your story more.
- jessica
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- 2010-04-24 11:17
1. Your Reading Plan
I will read this book in a one day.
2. Topics Telling the Theme
# Topics
1 What is friendship?
2 Choosing a Friend
3 How to make Friends
4 Playing on a Team
5 How to Be a Friend
6 How to Keep Friend
7 Things Friends don't Do
8 Be True to yourself
9 Do a right Thing
10 Outsmarting a Bully
11 Having a Best Friend
12 Changing Friends
13 Forever Friends
14 Sharing friendship
3. Speed Reading Practice
Topic chosen: Playing on a team
Round Elapsed Time
1_______min ___34sec
2 ______min ___31sec
3 ______min___ 25sec
4. Comprehension & Composition
(1) #1What is friendship?
A "friendship" means having friends.
(2) #3 How can you be friendly to others?
I can say ‘hi’ or ‘hello’ to new friends. How about you?
I can share a toy and not tease others.
(3) #5
Write how to be a friend. I will share my things with my friends. How about you?
I will take turn,and be fair. Treat my friends the way I want to be treated.
(4) #7
Write things a good friend doesn’t do. I would say ‘A good friend doesn’t hurt others.’
Don't get mean. Don't tease others and never use mean names or say bad words.
(5) #10
When I was in first grade, a big tall boy always teased me. I cried and told it to my teacher.
But he didn’t stop bullying me. What does this book say about how to treat a bully?
Pretend it doesn't bother you. Say"whatever" or "I heard that in kindergarten".When you don't get upset , it got fun out of it, and the bully will stop.If you are worried about being pick on, join up with another kid. Then go ask someone else to play with you. Bullies don't usually bother group of kids.Don't let a bully take your lunch money or things.Play near the adult on the playground. Always tell your parents if a bully is picking on you. When kids and grownup stand up to bullies, they quit.
(6) #
My best friend is Heesoo. We went to middle school together. We still see each other often and go on a trip together.
Who is your best friend and what do you do with him or her?
My best friend is Ellen. Ellen is 9 years old like me. She has 7 years old younger brother.
Tomorrow we will go to zoo together.
We usually play at my house .We play tag together. We also read book together.
- 홍박샘
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- 2010-04-27 20:56
You got all questions right.
That means you read the book carefully
and find the good part to get the right answers.
I like the way you checked the answers with the book.
But next time when you answer I would like you to add your own idea.
That will make your answers more interesting.
And I also like the story bout Ellen.
I hope you had fun at the Zoo.
- !림스마미
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- 2010-04-24 10:57
미션수행 완료했으나...
대기자 신분이라 댓글로는 달지 않구요^^
오랜만에 한 쓰기라 서로 느낌이 새로웠답니다.
감사드립니다^^
- Kelly
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- 2010-04-26 12:46
첫 미션도 "친구"인데 같이 하면서 친구 되면 좋을 듯 해요..
어서요...아이가 하고 싶을때 해야 하잖아요
- 홍박샘
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- 2010-04-27 20:50
- esther
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- 2010-04-23 19:02
1. If you already finished reading the book, how did you read?
I read on the Two days ago and I read this book on the chair and it was very fantastic.
2. This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.
#
Topics: Learning to be a good friend
1
What is friendship? What is friendship and what the friends do….
2
Choosing a friend : What the each of the friends do, how to do with the friends
3
How to make friends: how to be friendly to friends, what we need to do when we make the friends.
4
Playing on a team: having some team with her or he
5
How to be a friend: having a lots of time with a friends keeping doing n***e to the friends
6
How to keep friends: when you promises with you friends you must keeping promises that’s how you keep the friends
7
Things friends Don’t Do: When you are friends you must having nice to your friends.
8
Be True to yourself: you need to say true for yourself
9
Do the right things: when friends do bad thing don’t follow your friends show right things yourself
10
Outsmarting a Bully: when the bad kids bother you don’t look at him and just be quit then mean boy will be quit for you
11
Having a Best Friends: You can make a best friends that the most friendly friend, you can sleep at the friends house so can make best time with your best friends
12
Changing Friends: when your good friends having another friends then you can make a another good friends too.
13
Forever friends: you can make a forever friends with you sister or brother
14
Sharing friendship: You can share the Friends ship with the friends
3. Choose one topic you like and read it three times quickly. Time your each reading and record how long each round took. The speed reading practice helps you read a story quickly and exactly as well as you understand the meaning well.
Topic chosen: Choosing a Friend. __________________________________________________________
Round
Elapsed Time
1
____________0___min _________35_____sec
2
_______________0min _____________35_sec
3
_______________0min ______________30sec
4. Pick 3 questions and answer them. Write in complete sentences.
(# refers to the topic number you wrote above.)
(1) #1
What is friendship?
Friendship means having friends
Everyone needs friendship in his or her life
Friendship could make a good time
(2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
I can say ‘hi’ or ‘hello’ to new friends. How about you?
At the elementary school when it was break time then play with my friends
Having a lots of fun time with my friends
Going to the same school with my friends
(3) #5
Write how to be a friend. I will share my things with my friends. How about you?
Be nice to him or she that you want to making a friends
Be nicely to him or she that you want to making a friends to be an happy
Lend lots of things when the friends don’t have things that need it.
(4) #7
Write things a good friend doesn’t do. I would say ‘A good friend doesn’t hurt others.’
I should know that the good friends don’t lie.
I know that the good friend don’t teasing
I already know that the good friends don’t bothering you.
(5) #10
When I was in first grade, a big tall boy always teased me. I cried and told it to my teacher.
But he didn’t stop bullying me. What does this book say about how to treat a bully?
Say, “I heard that one in kinder- garden” or “Whatever.” When you don’t get upset, it takes the fun out of it, and the bully will stop
When someone bother you can go ask someone else to play with you.
Play near other kids or near the adult on the playground
Always tell your parents if a bully is picking on you
(6) #
My best friend is Heesoo. We went to middle school together. We still see each other often and go on a trip together. Who is your best friend and what do you do with him or her?
My best friends is Jenny and I was going to the park
My best friends is Jenny and I was having a fun time at the Jenny’s birthday party
My best friends is Jenny and I was having a best time at my birthday party
My best friends is Jenny and I was having a fantastic time ski resort
- esther 맘
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- 2010-04-24 13:48
온라인 숙제를 많이 한 탓에 영타 속도는 저보다 빠릅니다.
로긴이나 숙제 올리는 것만 도와주었네요.
근데 나중에 보니 고쳤으면 하는 부분들이 있는데, 이걸 같이 얘기해보고 고쳐서 올리는 것이 나을까요??
- 홍박샘
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- 2010-04-26 11:42
문법 공부가 아니라 문장으로 답하기, 책 읽고 글쓰기가 목표니까요.
자꾸 오류를 지적하면 생각을 자유롭게 하지 못 합니다.
- 홍박샘
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- 2010-04-27 20:49
Thank you for telling us about Jenny.
I have a question: Why did you repeat the same pattern?
You wrote "My best friend is Jenny ~' 4 times.
How about this?
'My friend is Jenny. We had fun together a lot.
We went to a park together.
We had fun when each of us had a birthday party.
We also had fantastic time at a ski resort.
Wrting is like speking.
Imagine someone is before you and you talk to the person.
You might not want to say the same sentence again and again.
Do you agree?
- Amy(g6211)
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- 2010-04-22 22:59
1. If you already finished reading the book, how did you read?
I read the first half on Wednesday evening and the later half on Wednesday night.
2. This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a Friend
3
How to make friends
4
Playing on a team
5
How to be a friend
6
How to keep friends
7
Things friends don’t do
8
Be true to yourself
9
Do the right thing
10
Outsmarting a bully
11
Having a best friend
12
Changing friends
13
Forever friends
14
Sharing friendship
3.
Topic chosen: Playing on a team
Round
Elapsed Time
1
____________min _____20_______sec
2
_______________min ____34______sec
3
______________min ___ 17______sec
4.
(1) #1 What is friendship?
A friendship is sharing.
A friendship is taking turns.
A friendship is being fair.
(2) #3
I can help new friends.
I can share things with my friends.
I can play games taking turns.
(3) #5
I will not tease my friends.
I will always smile to my friends.
I will always being fair.
(4) #7
A good friend doesn’t kick each other.
A good friend doesn’t punch each other.
A good friend doesn’t bite each other.
(6) #
My best friends are Lyn and Sarah. We went to kindergarten together.
We go to the math class together. We did a sleepover, too. We often meet each other.
We are very happy.
- 홍박샘
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- 2010-04-23 06:49
You and your friends have sleepovers sometimes.
Sleepovers when you grow up must be a great memory to you all.
I saw your speedy reading record.
What happened in the second round?
Did you get distracted or someone bothered you?
It took longer time than the first round.
I was just curious. :)
Execellent job, Amy!!
- amymom
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- 2010-04-23 09:47
- ben2
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- 2010-04-22 22:06
Are you going to read the whole book at once or spread it out over two or three days?
I will read this book at once.
If you already finished reading the book, how did you read?
I read this book twice.
2. Topics Telling the Theme
This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a friend
3
How to make friends
4
Play on a team
5
How to be a friend
6
How to keep friends
7
Things friend don’t do
8
Be true to your self
9
Do the right thing
10
outsmarting a bully
11
Having a best friend
12
Changing friends
13
Forever friends
14
Sharing friendship
.
Topic chosen :How to make friends
Round
Elapsed Time
1
_______________min ______48______sec
2
_______________min ______41_____sec
3
_______________min ______37________sec
(1) #1
What is friendship?
I think the friendship is playing together.
The friendship means sharing, taking turns, and caring others.
(2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
I can say ‘hi’ or ‘hello’ to new friends. How about you?
I will be always nice to others.
I will never fight with friends.
(3) #5
Write how to be a friend. I will share my things with my friends. How about you?
I will play the soccer with everyone.
I will keep the promise.
(4) #7
Write things a good friend doesn’t do. I would say ‘A good friend doesn’t hurt others.’
I would say “A good friend plays with everyone who wants to play.
I would say “A good friend doesn’t make fun of friends.
- 홍박샘
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- 2010-04-23 06:41
You have great English skills.
I can't see major errors in your writing.
I think you were very careful writing each sentence.
Finding the answers from the book is a very good way to write a story.
You did a very good job on that.
If you want to make your story more fun,
just write what you want to say without worring grammar next time.
Excellent job, Ben!
- nate
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- 2010-04-22 20:52
If you already finished reading the book, how did you read?
I read the book without recess yesterday night and I read the book with my mother and read by turns.
2.
This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a friends
3
How to make friends
4
Playing on a team
5
How to be a friends
6
How to keep friends
7
Things friends don’t do
8
Be true to yourself
9
Do the right thing
10
Outsmarting a bully
11
Having a best friends
12
Changing friends
13
Forever friends
14
Sharing friendship
3.
Topic chosen: Playing on a team
Round
Elapsed Time
1
_______________min _________34_____sec
2
_______________min _________26_____sec
3
_______________min _________25_____sec
4.
(1) #1
What is friendship?
Friendship means having friends. Everyone needs friendship.
(2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
I praise and I first talk to new friends.
(3) #5
Write how to be a friend. I will share my things with my friends. How about you?
I treat being fair and I take turns.
(4) #7
Write things a good friend doesn’t do. I would say ‘A good friend doesn’t hurt others.’
A good friends doesn’t punch others and a good friends doesn’t tease others.
(5) #10
When I was in first grade, a big tall boy always teased me. I cried and told it to my teacher.
But he didn’t stop bullying me. What does this book say about how to treat a bully?
Pretend it doesn’t bother you. When you don’t get upset, it takes the fun out of it and the bully will stop.
(6) #
My best friend is Heesoo. We went to middle school together. We still see each other often and go on a trip together. Who is your best friend and what do you do with him or her?
I want to have the quiet friend when I will be four grade. I will play games with my quiet friend.
- 홍박샘
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- 2010-04-23 06:32
I laughed a lot after I read about your hope to have a quiet friend.
I guess you have trouble having a very noisy one now.
I like the way you read the book with your mommy.
Taking turns reading helps you feel reading is fun.
I have a question: What do you mean by 'treat being fair'?
I think you wanted to say 'I try to be fair when treating others'
If that's right, give me an example how you treat others fairly.
Hope you enjoyed your work like I did!
- nate
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- 2010-04-23 15:05
My friends and I take turns a game ten minutes. This is fair.
- murdock
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- 2010-04-22 18:31
If you already finished reading the book, how did you read?
I will read _the whole book at once.
_____________________________________________________________________________.
This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a friend
3
How to make friends
4
Playing on a team
5
How to be a friend
6
How to keep friends
7
Things friends don’t do
8
Be true to yourself
9
Do the right thing
10
Outsmarting a Bully
11
Having a best friend
12
Changing friends
13
Forever friends
14
Sharing friendship
Topic chosen: Changing friends
Round
Elapsed Time
1
_______________min _____41_________sec
2
_______________min _____30________sec
3
_______________min _____29________sec
(2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
I can help my friends when they have a problem.
I can share my books with my friends.
(3) #5
Write how to be a friend
I will play a game with my friends.
I will draw pictures with my friends.
(4) #7
Write things a good friend doesn’t do
A good friend doesn’t fight with others.
A good friend doesn’t tease others.
(6) # Who is your best friend and what do you do with him or her?
My best friend is Tim. We go to elementary school together.
We jumped rope at school and played outside after school.
And also we like Science, too!
- 홍박샘
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- 2010-04-22 21:04
I'm amazed at your language skills.
No major grammatical errors are found.
Only it would have been better
if you had kept the present tense in the sentences about Tim.
(jumped -ㅡ jump, played -- play)
And jumping rope is also one thing you do outside.
How about this:
'We play together outside, doing jumping rope, playing balls or sliding down the slide.'
This kind of detailed writing makes others want to read your story more.
Good job and keep up the good work!!
- murdock
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- 2010-05-04 11:47
I will write like that next time!!
- linnie
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- 2010-04-22 17:04
If you finished raeding the book, how did you read?
I read the whole book just today. It took about 10minutes.
This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a friend
3
How to make friends
4
Playing on a team
5
How to be a friend
6
How to keep friends
7
Things friends don’t do
8
Be true to yourself
9
Do the right thing
10
Outsmarting a bully
11
Having a best friend
12
Changing friends
13
Forever friends
14
Sharing friendship
Topic chosen: How to be a friend
Round
Elapsed Time
1
_______________min __________40____sec
2
_______________min _________36_____sec
3
_______________min _________34_____sec
(1) #1
What is friendship?
I think friendship is playing together.
And friendship is having fun time.
Also Friendship is caring about my friend.
(2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
I can say ‘hi’ or ‘hello’ to new friends. How about you?
I can be friendly by saying cheer up to my friend that lost the soccer game.
I can lend my pencil or eraser to my friend.
When my friend is looking for something that he lost, I can help him finding it.
(4) #7
Write things a good friend doesn’t do. I would say ‘A good friend doesn’t hurt others.’
A good friend doesn’t tease others.
A good friend doesn’t trick or cheat others.
(5) #10
When I was in first grade, a big tall boy always teased me. I cried and told it to my teacher.
But he didn’t stop bullying me. What does this book say about how to treat a bully?
If a bully is teasing you, pretend it doesn’t bother you.
If you join up with another kid, the bully will stop picking on you.
(6) #
My best friend is Heesoo. We went to middle school together. We still see each other often and go on a trip together. Who is your best friend and what do you do with him or her?
My best friend’s English name is Geni and I go to school with her every Thursday.
I play with her by reading books or playing outside or some other things.
And I also have lunch with her together in the school cafeteria when I meet her there.
- 홍박샘
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- 2010-04-22 18:18
This book might be little too easy for you.
But it makes us think a lot about 'Friends.'
You know how to write in complete sentences very well.
Since you are able to read this level of texts easily,
I suggest you try harder expressions when writing.
Instead of writing about just simple facts like "I play with her
by reading books or playing outside or some other things,"
why don't you write more specifically.
For example, "When I play with her I feel she ___________________________________________.
That 's why I like her."
I hope to see this kind of details in your next writing.
Again, I'm amazed at your beautiful job.
Keep up the good work!
- marblelin
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- 2010-04-22 15:33
If you already finished reading the book, how did you read?
I read the whole book at once __.
2. Topics Telling the Theme
This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.
#
Topics
1
What is friendship?
2
Choosing a friend
3
How to make friend.
4
Playing on a team
5
How to Be a friend
6
How to keep friend
7
Things friends Don’t Do
8
Be True to yourself
9
Do the Right Thing
10
Outsmarting a Bully
11
Having a Best friend
12
Changing friends
13
Forever friends
14
Sharing friendship
3. Speed Reading Practice
Topic choose_____Things Friends Don’t Do___________
Round
Elapsed Time
1
_______________min __36__sec
2
____________min __29___sec
3
____________min __26___sec
2) #3
How can you be friendly to others?
I can say ‘hi’ or ‘hello’ to new friends. How about you?
I can say ‘Thanks’ or ‘sorry’ or ‘Are you okay?’ like that to other friends.
A Guidebook for Kids
#1 Learning to be a Good Friend by Christine A. Adams
The book said, “I heard that one kindergarten” or “ Whatever” like that.
(6) #
My best friend is Heesoo. We went to middle school together. We still see each other often and go on a trip together. Who is your best friend and what do you do with him or her?
My best friend is Lia Kim. She play along and I came to play with her.
We play together.
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- 홍박샘
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- 2010-04-22 18:01
You must be a very fluent reader.
A fluent reader is a person whe reads quickly
and at the same time understands the meaning very well.
We all work hard to be a fluent reader.
I have a question:
You wrote
What was the question for this answer? Was it (5) question?
Then, why can saying 'Whatever' work to face a bully?
- 빨강머리앤
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- 2010-04-22 19:43