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#4 Happy to be Me

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  • 2010-05-19 11:08
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À¯·Éȸ¿ø, °¨»çÀÎ»ç µå¸®·Á Ä¿¹Ö¾Æ¿ôÇÕ´Ï´Ù  ^^  °Ç°­ÇϽÃÁö¿ä ?

°ÅâÇÏ°Ô À¯·É'ȸ¿ø'À̶ö °Íµµ ¾øÀÌ, ¿ä ¹Ì¼Ç ´Þ¶û Çϳª ¾îÁ¦ ÇØº» °ÅÁö¸¸,

ÁÁÀº Ä¿¸®Å§·³ ¹Þ¾Æ¸Ô°í ÀÔ´Û°í ÀֱⰡ ±«·Î¿Í¼­ ´Þ·Á¿Ô¾î¿ä ^^

 

Ŭ·¹¾î´Â ÷¿£ Ã¥¿¡ º°·Î ¿­±¤ÇÏÁö ¾Ê¾Æ¼­ »ç³õ°íµµ 2ÁÖ ³Ñ°Ô Ã¥À常 Â÷ÁöÇϰí ÀÖ¾ú´Âµ¥  -¿­±¤ÇÏÁö ¾ÊÀ¸¸é ¸¹ÀÌ ±ÇÇÏÁöµµ ¾Ê´Â ±ÍÂ÷´Ï½ºÆ® & ¼Ò½É ¾ö¸¶ÀÓ´Ù -

¿ÀÈ÷·Á ¹Ì¼ÇÀ» ÇØº¸°í ³ª¼­ °ü½ÉÀÌ »ý°å´ÂÁö, ¼³±³Á¶·Î read out loud Çϱ⵵ ÇÏ°í ³ª¸§ ¹º°¡ ¾ò¾î³»°í ½ÍÀºÁö °ö¾Ã¾î°¡¸ç Àд ÆûÀÌ... ÁÁÀº ±³»çÀÇ ÁÁÀº ÀÚ±ØÀÌ ¾î¶² È¿°ú¸¦ ³º´ÂÁö ±³°ú¼­Ã³·³ º¸¿©Áֳ׿ä ^^

 

self-esteem´Ï respect´Ï ÇÏ´Â ÁÖÁ¦µéÀÌ, ´Ã ´Ù¸¥ Åë·Î·Î À̾߱⸦ Çϰí´Â À־ ¾ö¸¶¶û ´ë³õ°í °ø·«Çϱâ´Â »¹ÂâÇÒ ¼öµµ ÀÖ´Â °ÅÀε¥, ÀÛ¹® °úÁ¦¸¦ ÅëÇØ¼­ ¾î·ÆÁö ¾Ê°Ô À̾߱⠳ª´­ ¼ö ÀÖ¾ú³×¿ä. ´Ù È«¹Ú»ù´Ô ´öºÐÀ̾îÀ¯.

¿¹½Ã¸¦ Áֽðí Áú¹®À» ´øÁö´Ï ±Û¾²±â°¡ ½±°Ô ź·ÂÀ» ¹Þ´Â °Å °°´õ±º¿ä. ¸¶Ä§ ºñ½ÁÇÑ °æÇèÀÌ À־ ±×·±°¡?

¿©ÇÏÆ° öÀÚ Æ²¸®°í ½ÃÁ¦ Ʋ¸®´Â °Å ¿¹»ç·Î ÇÏ´Â °Å ¿Ü¿£, Áñ°Ì°Ô Çß½À´Ï´Ù. °¨»çÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

 

12±â ¿©·¯ºÐµé, ÁÁÀº Áú¹®À» ´øÁú ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¼±»ý´ÔÀÌ Á¤¸» ´É·ÂÀÚ ¼±»ý´ÔÀ̽ʴϴÙ.

Àç¹Ì¾ø¾î¼­ µµ¸Á°¡½ÃÁö ¾Ê°Ô ²Ë ºÙÀâ°í Á¶ÀßÁ¶Àß ½Å³ª°Ô ¹Ì¼ÇÇϼſä !!!!!

´Ù½Ã Çѹø Âð~ÇÏ°Ô °¨»çµå¸®±¸¿ä, 12±â ºÏŬ·´ ´ë¹Ú ±â¿øÇÏ¸ç ¹°·¯°©´Ï´Ù. ~~~

 

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  • 2010-05-19 18:00
anthropo°¡ ĪÂù ÇßÀ¸¸é ³­ ¾È ±×·¡µµ Å« ÀÔÀÌ ´õ Ä¿Á®¿ë ^___________________^
°Ç°­Àº ±¦ÂúÀ¸½Å°¡? Claire ±Û º¸°í ½ÍÀºµ¥ ¾ÕÀ¸·Î ÇÏ´Â °úÁ¦ ´Ù ¸ð¾Ò´Ù°¡ ÇÑ ¸ò¿¡ º¸¿©ÁÖ½´.
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  • 2010-05-19 23:53
Á¤½Ä ȸ¿ø ¾Æ°¡µé °ü¸®ÇϽñ⵵ Àå³­ÀÌ ¾Æ´Ò ÅÍÀε¥, ¾îÂî ¿°Ä¡¾øÀÌ Å¬·¹¾î ²¨ äÁ¡ÇØ´Þ¶ó µéÀ̹аھî¿ä ! (½ÇÀº Àúµµ Á¤½Å¾ø¾î¼­¸®... °¡À»Âë µÑ° µ¥¸®°í ºÏŬ·´ ²¸µé¾îº¼¶ó²¿¿ä ^^) À¯·ÉÁþÀÌ¶óµµ ¿­½ÉÈ÷ ÇØº¸¶ó´Â äÂïÁú·Î ¾Ë¾Æµè°Î¼Å¿ä~ ^^ ±×³É ¸»¾¸¸¸À¸·Îµµ °¨»çÇÔ´Ù !

#6 ÀÛ¹®ÇÑ °ÍÀº ¿¹½Ã¹®°ú ¿¬°üÀÌ À־,... ¿¹½Ã¹®ÀÌ ¾ÆÀ̵éÀÇ ¿¬»óÀÛ¿ë¿¡ ÀÌ·± ½ÄÀ¸·Î ÀÚ±ØÀ» ÁÖ¾ú³×¿ä... ÇÏ´Â ÇϳªÀÇ ¿¹·Î Ŭ·¹¾î ¾´ °Å ¿Ã·Áº¼²²¿ä. öÀÚ Æ²¸° °Í¸¸ °íÄ¡°í Áö°¡ ¾´ ±×´ë·Î ¿Ã¸³´Ï´Ù (Çкθð Âü°ü¼ö¾÷ ¶§ ¹ßÇ¥ÇÑ °Í°ú °ü·ÃµÈ ³»¿ëÀ̳׿ä) :

I guess I have lost my self-esteem during the big speech. I was speaking in front of all my classmates and their parents (my parent were there, too). I have stopped speaking during my presentation because suddenly my brain went all white. All the people were staring at me, which scared me a lot and my heart began to run faster.
Just then, I felt the warm smile in everybody's face which made me think 'they are supporting me', so I continued my presentation. When I finished it, they all clapped to me.
Maybe the big speech did not make me lose my self-esteem but gave me a chance to feel it inside my heart.
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  • Dr. Hong
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  • 2010-05-20 09:44
Dear Claire,
Whenever I feel I'm messing up, I want to think my loved ones will still love me,
even though this goes wrong. And all those years it was true.
I'm glad you had such nice audience, remaining supportive with a warm smile.

Thank you for sharing your story. I am amzed at your writing.
You know how to tell a stoty, picking up an event and make it interesting.
And I'm also amazed at your excellent English skills.
Keep up the good work!
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  • 2010-05-17 17:55
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¹Ì¼Ç2¿¡ éÅÍ 8¿¡ ÇÑ ºÎºÐÀÌ "If you~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~....................are!"À̶ó´Â ¶æÀÎ °Í °°Àºµ¥

éÅÍ 8¿¡ ÀÌ ºÎºÐÀÌ ¾ø°í, éÅÍ3¿¡ Àֳ׿ä.

À߸øµÈ °Í °°³×¿ä.^*^

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  • Dr. Hong
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  • 2010-05-19 17:58
What do you mean?
The 2nd task is just speed reading check.
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  • 2010-05-20 13:44
Áß¿äÇÏÁö ¾ÊÀº °ÍÀε¥ ¾ÆÀ̰¡ ²À È®ÀÎÇϳ׿ä. ÀÌ·± »ç¶÷À» '»¡°£Ææ¼±»ý´Ô'À̶ó°í ÇÏÁÒ^^
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  • Dr. Hong
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  • 2010-05-20 14:08
Sorry, Sumin.
I got mixed up.
Thank you for pointing out that.
You've got to be my assistant.
If I make the same mistake next time, pleas go ahead and tell me.
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  • 2010-05-15 14:16
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  • 2010-05-15 19:35
¾î¿©»Û ÁÖ¿ï ±Û ÀÐ°í ¿À·£¸¸¿¡ ³¥³¥ ¿ô³×.
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Áö±ÝÀº »ì»ì °¡Áö¸¸ Á¡Â÷ º»°Ý ±Û¾²±â Áöµµ¿¡ µé¾î°¡¿ä.
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1³âÀÌ·¡¾ß 54¹ø ¹Û¿¡ ´õ µÅ¿ä?
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  • diana
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  • 2010-05-12 20:50
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i'm diana

i think this book are good for me    but it little hard to me             

so,mom is help me little

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  • 2010-05-13 08:45
Hey, Diana!
This book sure is a bit difficult to understand.
Read several times until the meaning gets clear.
You don't have to translated every word,
just get a big picture about the whole passages.
I'm so glad to have you in the writing club, Diana.
Keep up the good work!!
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  • 2010-05-13 22:17
okay,sir.
i read several times the book.
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  • 2010-05-14 10:07
Diana, I'm a woman. :)
You meant, 'OK, ma'am!' right?
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  • diana
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  • 2010-05-17 23:28
oh, sorry
you are a woman?
i'm sorry ma'am!
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  • 2010-05-12 17:31
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