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1. Topics Telling the Theme

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Topics

1

It¡¯s Okay to Cry.

2

It¡¯s Okay to Ask Questions

3

It¡¯s Not Your Fault

4

It¡¯s Good to Share Your Feelings

5

Where Is Your Loved One Now

6

Trust That You will Be Taken care of

7

Sone Things will stay the same

8

Sone things will change

9

You might feel all mixed up

10

It¡¯s good to ask for help

11

Hug your family

12

Your loved one is a special friend

13

It¡¯s good to remember

14

Give it time

 

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When you lose someone close, you might feel sad, mad, scared, or lonely.

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When you lose someone you might feel sad, mad, scard, or lonely. If you try to hold,  it can make feel even worse

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4. Comprehension & Composition

1. #1

My friend once said, ¡°When my father died, I could not cry with my children around.¡± Being sad is natural and you can cry. It¡¯s not something bad you should hide. Everyone can be moved to tears, even grown-ups. Did you ever feel you wanted to cry at something but you tried to hold back tears? Tell me when and why you did.

When my grandmother¡¯s mom died I wanted cry

But I don¡¯t cry Becas I¡¯m a man

 

 

2. #4

Have you ever lost someone or something close to you? It could be your family, pet or plants. When they died or left you, how did you feel? Tell me your memory when you lost the person or the thing first

I lost my mom when I was yong. I was in ¹«ÁÖ. Me and sister and mom go to market.

But I see toy so I miss my mom so I go to home

There is my mom!

 

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1. Topics Telling the Theme

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1

It¡¯s Okay to Cry.

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it's okay to ask questions

3

it's not your fault

4

is good to share your feelings

5

where is your loved one now?

6

trust that you will be taken care of

7

some things will stay the same

8

some things will change

9

you migh feel all mixed up

10

is good to ask for help

11

hug your family

12

your loved one is a specal friend

13

it's good to remember

14

give it time

2. Speed Reading Practice

Choose two topics in a row and read them three times quickly.

Topics: It's okey to cry

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3. The Quick Write

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4. Comprehension & Composition

1. #1

My friend once said, ¡°When my father died, I could not cry with my children around.¡± Being sad is natural and you can cry. It¡¯s not something bad you should hide. Everyone can be moved to tears, even grown-ups. Did you ever feel you wanted to cry at something but you tried to hold back tears? Tell me when and why you did.

2. #4

Have you ever lost someone or something close to you? It could be your family, pet or plants. When they died or left you, how did you feel? Tell me your memory when you lost the person or the thing first.

One day I lost my cat Juju

She was a very cute cat.

but next day my mom find her.

She said "Juju was waiting for me in morning"

I was as sad as a basset hound when I lost her but I was happy when I found her

 

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1. Topics Telling the Theme

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Topics

1

It¡¯s Okay to Cry.

2

It¡¯s Okay to ask questions

3

It¡¯s not your fault.

4

It¡¯s good to share your feelings.

5

Where is your loved one now?

6

Trust that you will be taken care of

7

Some things will stay the same

8

Some things will change

9

You might feel all mixed up

10

It¡¯s good to ask for help

11

Hug your family

12

You loved one is a special friend

13

It¡¯s good to remember

14

Give it time

 

 

 

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Choose two topics in a row and read them three times quickly.

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Topics: Trust you will be taken care of, Some things stay the same

 

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3

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3. The Quick Write

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When you lose someone close, you might feel sad, mad, scared, or lonely.

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4. Comprehension & Composition

1. #1

My friend once said, ¡°When my father died, I could not cry with my children around.¡± Being sad is natural and you can cry. It¡¯s not something bad you should hide. Everyone can be moved to tears, even grown-ups. Did you ever feel you wanted to cry at something but you tried to hold back tears? Tell me when and why you did.

 

When I was six, my pet fish dies.

So I feel I could cry. But I hold up tears. Because I would cry the died fish will unhappy in heaven.

When I am happy, the fish will happy,too.

I think about it. So I can hold my tears. So I¡¯m always happy.

 

 

 

 

2. #4

Have you ever lost someone or something close to you? It could be your family, pet or plants. When they died or left you, how did you feel? Tell me your memory when you lost the person or the thing first.

 

When My beetles died, I feel alone.

It was really worse.

I can¡¯t believe one day the beetles make ¡®tap, tap, tap¡¯noies and it dies. I don¡¯t know why it dies. I like him or her. It was caterpillar. So I don¡¯t know it is he or she. I¡¯m still sad.

 

 

 

5. Writing a reply

Look around our writing club and read other¡¯s writing. Pick one person who you like to reply. Then leave a message to the person.

For example, Hi, I¡¯m Kate. I read your writing. I think you were really brave. If I were you, I could never behave like you. My mom said, ¡°if you are in trouble, just tell adults around you!¡± But you solved the problems without any grown-up¡¯s help. You¡¯re so cool!!! I want to be able to do like you!!!

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Hi I'm grace. I'm in 3th grade.
Did you have a pet fish? I envy you.
My mom doesn't let me keep a pet.
I'm so glad to meet you.*^^*
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1. Topics Telling the Theme

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Topics

1

It¡¯s Okay to Cry.

2

It¡¯s Okay to ask 9questions

3

It¡¯s not your fault

4

It¡¯s good to share your feelings

5

Where is your Loved one now?

6

Trust that you will be taken care of

7

Some things will stay the same

8

Some things will change

9

You might feel all mixed up

10

It¡¯s good to ask for help

11

Hug your family

12

Your lived one is a special friend

13

It¡¯s good to remember

14

Give it time

 

2. Speed Reading Practice

Choose two topics in a row and read them three times quickly.

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Topics: It¡¯s not your fault, Hug your family

Round

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2

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3

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3. The Quick Write

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When you lose someone close, you might feel sad, mad, scared, or lonely.

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Talk about how you are feeling right now with someone who cares about you.

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 When you lose someone close, you might feel sad mad scared, or loney. If you tired  to hold feelings can make you feel worse. Talk about how you are feeling now with someone cares about you.

 

 

 

 

4. Comprehension & Composition

1. #1

My friend once said, ¡°When my father died, I could not cry with my children around.¡± Being sad is natural and you can cry. It¡¯s not something bad you should hide. Everyone can be moved to tears, even grown-ups. Did you ever feel you wanted to cry at something but you tried to hold back tears? Tell me when and why you did.

When I was changed of school, I feel sad and loney.  I want cry but I¡¯m not that. Because my mom and dad sad too. Now, I still sad and missing that school.  My best friend going that school,  my favorite teacher is there.

 

 

 

 

 

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1. Topics Telling the Theme

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Topics

1

It¡¯s Okay to Cry.

2

It¡¯s Okay to Ask Question.

3

It¡¯s Not Your Fault.

4

It¡¯s Good to Share Your Feeling.

5

Where is Your Loved One Now?

6

Trust That You Will Be Taken Care of.

7

Some Things Will Stay the Same.

8

Some Things Will Change.

9

You Might Feel All Mixed Up.

10

It¡¯s Good to Ask for Help.

11

Hug Your Family.

12

Your Loved One is a Special Friend.

13

It¡¯s Good to Remember.

14

Give It Time.

 

2. Speed Reading Practice

Choose two topics in a row and read them three times quickly.

Topics: Some things will stay the same.

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When you lose someone close, you might feel sad, mad, scared, or lonely.

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When you lose someone close, you might feel sad, mad, lonely.

You might want to keep this feelings inside. But this will make you feel even worse. Talk about this things with someone who cares about you.

 

4. Comprehension & Composition

1. #1

My friend once said, ¡°When my father died, I could not cry with my children around.¡± Being sad is natural and you can cry. It¡¯s not something bad you should hide. Everyone can be moved to tears, even grown-ups. Did you ever feel you wanted to cry at something but you tried to hold back tears? Tell me when and why you did.

When I had fall over a rock and trip  I didn¡¯t cry .

Because I am not a baby.

If I cry, my classmates say ¡°You are a cry baby!¡± so I didn¡¯t cry when I fall over.

 

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Have you ever lost someone or something close to you? It could be your family, pet or plants. When they died or left you, how did you feel? Tell me your memory when you lost the person or the thing first.

I don¡¯t have a dead people and a dead pet or plants.

So I wrote about my missing eraser.

I had a eraser are the match of a pencil.

But one day my special eraser was gone! I was mad and sad. I hope I find the eraser soon.

 

 

 

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Topics: It¡¯s okay to ask questions

It¡¯s not your fault

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I lost my friend because I moved my house. I was so sad and have tear. But I suppress my tears.

 

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