영작 부탁 좀... 여기 올려도 되나요?(급) > 초등영어 게시판

3학년 울딸이 학교에서 하는 영어말하기대회에 나가고 싶다고 해서

같이 대본을 써봤어요.

주제가 나의 꿈인데 울딸은 만화가가 되고 싶대요.

끄응... 넘 힘드네요.

읽어보시고 틀린 부분이나 어색한 부분 있음 수정해주시고...(많을 거예요ㅠ.ㅠ)

많은 조언 부탁드려요. Please~

Hello, Everyone!

My name is sally.

I'm 10 years old.

I have a dream.

I'm going to tell you about my dream.

My dream is to become a cartoon artist.

Cartoon always makes me laugh.

That's why I want to become a cartoon artist.

I want to make other people laugh with my cartoon.

My mom said that I used to draw something all day long when I was 4.

I still love drawing pictures.

I feel comfortable when I draw something with a pencil.

and I love writing stories too.

I always carry my little notebook.

Whenever I got an idea I wrote down in my notebook.

I like Miyazaki Hayao's animation films.

His films are really fantastic.

There are many characters in his films.

Espicially, I like Totoro in 'My Neighbor Totoro'

It's really ***** and cute.

I'd like to create my own characters.

I hope thoes characters to become as famous as Totoro.

To become a famouse cartoon artist, I need to know many things.

I have to be more sensitive and creative too.

Thesedays I read a lot and studying hard.

I draw pictures everyday.

I will keep trying.

I'm sure I can realize my dream.

Thank you!

네비게이션