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Title: Danny and the champion of the world
SUBJECT: My dad is same as my life ( in danny¡¯s life)
When I was four years old, my mother had died.
My father had stop poaching from hazls¡¯s wood at that moment and vow he will last that until I could sleep alone.
But his vow had broken when I was 9 years old.
Poaching is bad but I could understand how much my dad loves me.
There is two reason that my father always poaching in hazs¡¯s wood.
One is most of pheasants are there and second is he hate him.
But, nonetheless my dad told me he will be empty he¡¯s house
I will be disappointed (except when he go in company)
Because he didn¡¯t think that I would be kidnapped by someone
If he did, I would accept he didn¡¯t love me 100%
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