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아이가 영어캠프를 다녀왔나보네요.
여러가지 활동도 재미있게 하고 온것 같아 부럽습니다.
전체적으로 하고 싶은 얘기를 풀어내는데는 거리낌이 없지만
문법적인 정확성이나 스펠링은 조금 연습이 필요한 듯 합니다.
이제 5학년이 되면 그동안 쌓아온 영어실력을 탄탄하게 다져줄 문법학습이
필요한 시기가 되거든요.
영작문에서 기본적으로 필요한 punctuation과 capitalization도
좀 더 신경을 써주시구요.^^
그럼, 한문장씩 보도록 하겠습니다.
< Hallym Winter English camp >
< Hallym Winter English Camp >
제목은 각 단어를 대문자로 써주세요.
25/01/07
January 1st, 2007
영어식으로 날짜를 한번 바꿔봤어요.
Hallym English camp was so fun! It started in December 29 to January 25.
Hallym English camp was so fun! It was held from December 29 to January 25.
언제부터 언제까지 라는 말을 수정했습니다.
I was doing Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday.
I was there on Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday.
아마 화목토 클래스를 얘기하는거겠지요? 어떻게 표현해야 하나 고민하다가
거기에 있었다는 말로 수정해봤어요.
There were Monday, Wednesday and Friday too.
There were Monday, Wednesday and Friday class, too.
역시 class 를 넣어 이해가 되도록 고쳤구요.
First of english camp, it was interesting.
First of all, The English camp was interesting.
제가 문장을 제대로 이해한것인지 자신이 없네요.
무엇보다도..로 고쳐보긴 했는데 지금보니 처음에는 재미있었다는 뜻인것 같기도..ㅠ.ㅠ
Teachers are from Australia.
Most of the teachers were from Australia.
선생님들 전부 다는 아니므로 most of 를 넣어 수정했구요.
But there was two korean teacher. and TA teachers.
But there were two Korean teachers, and TA teachers.
두명이니까 was 가 아닌 were 가 되어야지요?
My level was J1. The highst level in elementary school students.
My level was J1, which was the highest in elementary school students.
highest 의 스펠링에 실수가 있었구요. 관계대명사 which 를 사용해서
J1 의 설명을 자연스럽게 이어줬습니다.
The 1st class is with Jin teacher, in 306 class. Jin teacher was only my Korean teacher.
The 1st class was with Miss Jin, at classroom 306.
Miss Jin was the only Korean teacher of mine.
전체적으로 시제를 과거형으로 통일해야겠지요? 그리고 306호에서~라는 표현은
306 class 가 아니라 at (class)room 306 이라고 해야 한답니다.
또 only 의 사용이 부자연스러워 수정을 조금 했구요.
It was listening and speaking class.
We have to speak loudly and naturally. So, we practice a lot.
We had to speak loudly and naturally. So, we practiced a lot.
역시 과거형이 되어야지요?
The 2nd class is with Jennifer teacher in 304 class.
The 2nd class was with Jennifer at classroom 304.
앞의 문장수정과 똑같은 부분을 고쳤어요.
그리고 선생님을 부를때 우리말처럼 제니퍼 선생님, 이렇게 부르지 않는답니다.
그냥 teacher~ 라고 부르거나 (이건 아주 어린 유치원생들일 경우..)
Miss , Mrs., Mr. 누구누구 이렇게 불러야 해요.
그래서 뒤의 선생님 호칭 부분도 모두 그냥 이름으로 수정했습니다.
She is Australian. We called her, Jenny.
She was Australian. We called her Jenny.
과거형으로 고쳤구요. called her 뒤에 쉼표는 없어도 되서 뺐습니다.
It was reading class. I like reading. but the book was little bit hard.
It was reading class. I like reading, but the book was a little bit hard.
little bit 앞에는 항상 a 가 들어가야 한답니다.^^
The 3rd class is with Christine teacher, in 204 class.
The 3rd class was with Christine, at classroom 204.
역시 과거형과 방번호 수정...
We called her, Chris. She is wonderful teacher.
We called her Chris. She was wonderful!
역시 쉼표는 필요없지요? 그리고 과거형이 되어야 하구요. 그리고
뒤에 teacher 란 단어가 또 나오므로 반복을 피하기 위해 여기서는 그냥 wonderful 만 넣었습니다.
만약 teacher 가 들어갔다면 a wonderful teacher 처럼 a 가 꼭 들어가야 하지요.^^
She was my best teacher. She is Australian and she was always kind to me.
She was my best teacher. She was Australian and always kind to me.
she was 가 두번 들어가서 한번으로 생략을 했어요.
It was grammar class. I don't like grammar but,, teacher was good!
She taught us grammar. I didn't like grammar, but the teacher was good!
역시 자연스러운 문맥을 위해 앞부분을 고쳤구요. 뒤의 문장도 쉼표의 쓰임새를 달리 해봤습니다.
So now, I interst of grammar.
So now, I am interested in grammar.
흥미가 있다는 표현은 be interested in~ 이라고 한답니다.
이런 표현은 책을 많이 읽어서 자연스럽게 익히도록 하는게 좋아요.^^
and the end of 3rd class, we were eating lunch.
And after the 3rd class was over, we ate lunch.
그대로 해석한다면 3교시 끝에, 그러니까 수업시간 중에 점심을 먹는다는게 되지요.
그래서 끝나고 나서~ 로 문장을 수정했습니다. 그리고 굳이 과거진행형일 필요는 없겠지요?
점심을 먹었다는 것을 말하고 싶은 것이지 그 먹는 동작중의 어떤 일을 설명하고 있는 것이 아니니까요.
The 4th class is with Simo teacher, in 302 class. He is Australian. I like him.
The 4th class was with Simo, at classroom 302. He was Australian. I liked him.
과거형으로 시제를 모두 고쳤습니다.
He was always kind to me. It was writing class.
I like writing very well.
and he said, " Your writing is great! so do more practice and you will get a nice writing!"
And he said, "Your writing is great! So do more practice and you will get a nice writing!"
잘 하셨는데 아쉽게 대문자로 시작하기에 실수가 있었지요?
The 5th and 6th class is activity with Leanie teacher.
The 5th and 6th class were activity with Leanie.
과거형~
We were doing 'Welcoming Party' 'Talent Show' 'Roal Playing'
' Mini Olympics' 'Treasure Hunt' 'Sing-along' 'Flea Market' 'BBQ Party'
'Golden Bell Quiz Show' 'Final Exam' and 'Performance'
We did 'Welcoming Party', 'Talent Show', 'Role Playing',
'Mini Olympics', 'Treasure Hunt', 'Sing-along', 'Flea Market', 'BBQ Party',
'Golden Bell Quiz Show', 'Final Exam' and 'Performance.'
와우, 재미있는 활동이 많았겠어요.
It was great experience to me!
It was a great experience to me!
experience 앞에 a 가 빠졌지요?
수고하셨습니다~!
: 조은진님의 글입니다.
-영어일기 < Hallym Winter English camp > 25/01/07 Hallym English camp was so fun! It started in December 29 to January 25. I was doing Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday. There were Monday, Wednesday and Friday too.First of english camp, it was interesting. Teachers are from Australia. But there was two korean teacher. and TA teachers. My level was J1. The highst level in elementary school students. The 1st class is with Jin teacher, in 306 class. Jin teacher was only my Korean teacher. It was listening and speaking class. We have to speak loudly and naturally. So, we practice a lot. The 2nd class is with Jennifer teacher in 304 class. She is Australian. We called her, Jenny.It was reading class. I like reading. but the book was little bit hard. The 3rd class is with Christine teacher, in 204 class. We called her, Chris. She is wonderfulteacher. She was my best teacher. She is Australian and she was always kind to me.It was grammar class. I don't like grammar but,, teacher was good! So now, I interst of grammar. and the end of 3rd class, we were eating lunch. The 4th class is with Simo teacher, in 302 class. He is Australian. I like him. He was always kind to me. It was writing class. I like writing very well. and he said, " Your writing is great! so do more practice and you will get a nice writing!" The 5th and 6th class is activity with Leanie teacher. We were doing 'Welcoming Party' 'Talent Show' 'Roal Playing' ' Mini Olympics' 'Treasure Hunt' 'Sing-along' 'Flea Market' 'BBQ Party''Golden Bell Quiz Show' 'Final Exam' and 'Performance' It was great experience to me!
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